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Task 1
You have heard about plans to build new apartments in public park near your home.
You want to give your opinion about this.
Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper, in your letter
explain how you learnt about these planssay what you think of the park
*give your opinion on the plans
Dear Sir,
I am writing your office regarding to the article published in your newspaper, The Straight Times dated October 22, 2013. This news gave me a shock as I read about the plans of constructing an apartment replacing the wonderful Woodlands park adjacent of our residential house located at 737 Woodlands circle.
The said park witnessed how I grew up, from the day I started to learn my first step on that place until these day that I need to jog to burn my excess fats. I Am just one of the many people who has unforgettable memories that soon will be vanished away if they will continue to replace the park with a building. They will prevent the future camaraderies that will be formed in between childrens in our community who will grow up at the same time, the killing time moments of the old folks just sitting and watching the kids running around, not to mention the cold fresh air and good view that the plants and trees in the park could give.
Hopefully they will not continue with their plan as it will upset most of us who live nearby the park. It’s good to have a development but not in exchange with destroying this good heritage place . Maybe it’s better if they can try to find an alternative place to construct their apartment.
Sincerely Yours,
ynnozki