@haunter08
wow perfect pronunciation mo. nice! this is one my weakness, tips nman dyan.
btw you can take a look essay format here http://www.writefix.com/
I got 90 in my written discourse and I used this format.
intro content:
topic
+side
thesis
1st paragraph content:
rewrite + side from the intro, in a new sentence
example1 of + side and supporting details
example2 of + side and supporting details
Conclude + side
2 paragraph content:
rewrite - side from the intro, in a new sentence
example 1 of - side and supporting details
example 2 of - side and supporting details
conclude - side
Conclusion content:
Summarize + and - side in one sentence
Your stand/recommendation and future outlook.