@bjsad214 eto mga comments ko sa recording mo:
parang mejo nag he-hesitate ka.
nag stutter ka before saying doctor. Any reason why?
mejo off yung pronunciation mo. Specifically these words: fast, balance, staff. Letter A sa words na yan dapat parang 'ae' hindi 'uh'. Sa words like legal, stress mo yung e na parang 'ee'
commas = half pauses, periods = full stops
Eto recording ko nung sentence mo. Pasensya na sa sound quality hahaha nagddrive ako eh.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B3WkIVufGvawRXBYUFF0NTVoQUk/view?usp=drivesdk
Yung reviewers na ginamit ko like MacMillan, meron mga sample recordings to compare. Helpful tong mga to. Try to google din mga pronunciation ng words na di ka confident.
Another tip, diba may timer before mag start yung recording? Dun pa lang nag read aloud na ko para ma practice before nung tunay na recording. This can help lessen stuttering due to hesitations kasi napasadahan mo na yung sentence.
Hope this helps! Kaya yan practice lang.