SAMPLE ESSAY BY STEVEN FERNANDEZ (MAS MAGANDANG IMEMORIZE NIYO TO. YOU CAN FINISH THE ESSAY PART IN 10-15 MINUTES)
Ang essay question sa akin: In today’s world, different government and international organization are confronting many problems. What is the most pressing problem among them? What can you suggest to solve this problem?
These days, there is an ongoing debate between people about _____________ and if it should be viewed as a positive or negative impact to society/individual/people (depende sa tinatanung sa essay). While it is possible to claim that__________ , my view is that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages (or balikad, if you're in favor of the positive impact). In this essay, I shall explain my point of view by analyzing both sides of the argument.
Firstly, there are several reasons why ________ is considered to be disadvantageous (advantageous, if you're in favor of the positive impact) to society. One of them is that __________________________. It can also be argued that ________________. It should also be taken into account that_____________________________
Secondly, those who argue for __________ have a different view and say that it can actually be a good thing. It is claimed that_____________________________. Then, there are concerns about _____________________________.
Finally, while there are strong arguments on both sides of the case, my personal opinion is that _____________________. I would strongly recommend that _____________.
ACTUAL OVERALL SCORE: 69 --- MOCK TEST OS: 61
Listening 67 ---------------------------------------- MT 70
Reading 69 ---------------------------------------- MT 56
Speaking 68 ---------------------------------------- MT 51
Writing 72 -------------------------------------------- MT 71
ENABLING SKILLS
Oral Fluency 80 ----------------------------------------MT 67
Grammar 63 ---------------------------------------- MT 49
Pronunciation 72 ---------------------------------------- MT 37
Spelling 89 ----------------------------------------MT 55
Vocabulary 61 ---------------------------------------- MT 90
Communicative Skills 90 ---------------------------- MT 47