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Eto po essay sample ko nung nka 90 po ako sa writing sa mock recently (actually pinag combine ko po E2Language Structure and Steven Francis Template) at thanks kay @mfvquines for giving me sample of his essay at sa ibang tumulong sken dito sa forum:
Nowadays, there is an ongoing debate between people whether violence portrayed in TV and
some movies leads to an increase rate of crime in our surroundings or it does not contribute to an increase crime rate. Although some people claimed that violence seen in TV can have a great impact on any individual especially in younger generations to commit crimes, other people believed that it is still the decision of the person to do a crime. This essay will elucidate the assertion of both sides of the argument before deducing an axiomatic conclusion.
To begin with, there are several reasons why some people claimed that violence seen in TV can have a great impact on any individual especially younger generations to do crimes. Firstly, there are people experiencing this kind of scenario where they blame the TV for doing such crime. As an example, University of Colorado conducted extensive research among convicts in Colorado state prison and 90% of the respondents said that they are influenced by what they have seen in television and imitated actions that eventually lead to crime. Thus, they claimed that TV can influence anyone to commit a crime.
Conversely, those who argue in favor of TV that does not contributes to an increased crime rate in the society have different standpoint. Firstly, these people believed that it is still the decision of an individual to do a crime. To illustrate, Tom Cruise an actor, is always making different violent movies but he does not commit any single crime. Therefore, it shows that committing a crime was due to decision.
In conclusion, considering what has been discussed above, it is no doubt that it is not the TV which contributes in an increase crime rate. I would strongly recommend that government should impose laws for criminals.