@kathrine try mo wag gamit templates. Tendency kasi buo na sentences nyan, tas Yung mga ideas mo di mo nadagdag ksi iisipin mo Yung namemorize mo na template..
Intro- 2-4 sentences
Body 1 - 4 sentences + examples
Body 2 - 4 sentences + examples
Conclusion- answer what is being asked, agree/ disagree, stand...
Try nyo Po in your own words..