@eunofficial
I am a big fan of subheadings. para mas klaro per paragraph ang gusto kong sabihin compared sa continuous sentences.
Here goes bits of my SOP...
<b>Postgraduate Study for A Successful Family Business</b> ( this answers why study, benefit sa career,etc.)
Furthermore, the program will be beneficial in developing skills related to management, finance and operations of the business. Ultimately, (school) will help the family business respond to competitive industry whilst I, the manager, gain new set of skills and industry experience to take home with me upon completing the program, for the betterment of our family and employees.
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My Choice Is More Than a School, It’s A Brand—(school) </b> (this answers why did I prefer this school, over other good schools based in Ph)
Personally, an institution that has established itself “as the most prestigious and revered cooking school in the world” is worth the investment—time and money. In our line of business, investments are gems that must be put into good use with a favorable return. I am quite optimistic that the leader in French culinary arts, gastronomic education and international hotel management and hospitality will offer a favorable opportunity whether for travel, world class career distinction or industry placement for competitive advantage.
In addition, (school) offered so much more in terms of connections, having a network of contacts from over 70 countries, besting my alumni linkages from University of Sydney and Western Sydney University.
Hope this helps. mahaba pa dyan statement ko. 😃