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  • choknatzchoknatz Singapore
    Posts: 89Member
    edited March 2018
    @goodminton thank you po. Mas madali pla pag May agent. Hopefully, makapagsubmit na ako Ng docs ko this week.

    Btw, need pa po ba ilagay sa cv ung work na hindi related sa skills nomination?
  • kymmekymme Western Australia
    Posts: 1,286Member
    @choknatz no need financial proof. financial declaration lng

    Registered Nurse Nec

    06/15 - touchdown Oz
    07/15 - start of classes (Bachelor in Nursing)
    05/16 - passed OET (after 4 failed attempts with IELTS and PTE)
    07/16 - finished uni
    07/16 - received AHPRA Australian Registered Nurse rego
    08/16 - student visa 500 (Diploma)
    10/16 - started working as an RN

    07/09/17 - Submitted EOI for State Nom Vic with 60points

    I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me

  • choknatzchoknatz Singapore
    Posts: 89Member
    @kymme thanks po.
  • jon1101ajon1101a Baguio City, Philippines
    Posts: 88Member
    Guys,

    Tama po ba? Ito lang mga kailangan na requirements na isubmit sa liveinmelbourne?

    01-CV
    02- please sign Victorian nomination declaration
    03-Skills assessment
    04-English language test results (if applicable)
    offer of employment (if applicable).

    Nagsubmit po kasi ako kahapon March 9 @ 4am tapos until now wala pa rin yung acknowledgement email nila.

    Mga gano katagal po bago po sila magreply na nareceive na nila yung application nyo?

    233914 - Engineering Technologist | Age: 30 pts | Education:15 pts | Experience : 5 pts | English:20 pts | Total:75 pts.

    01.12.17 - PTE take 1
    02.12.17 - PTE result competent : L-76, R-76, S-88, W-84 : 10 pts claimed
    02.13.17 - Updated EOI to VISA 189/190(NSW) (60/65)
    15.02.18 - PTE take 2
    16.02.18 - PTE result superior: L-79, R-80, S-90, W-79 : 20 pts claimed.
    17.02.18 - Updated EOI to VISA 189/190(NSW-VIC) (70/75)
    14.05.18 - Work experience milestone. 5 years
    Updated EOI to VISA 189/190(NSW-VIC) (75/80)
    11.08.18 - Invitation Received EOI 189. Finally. :D
    20.08.18 - 189 VISA lodge
    22.08.18 - Medicals at Nationwide
    07.11.18 - DIRECT GRANT after 80 days. :D

  • kymmekymme Western Australia
    Posts: 1,286Member
    @jon1101a the next working day yung acknowledgment ko. wait ka lng ng tuesday. Public holiday kasi s monday

    Registered Nurse Nec

    06/15 - touchdown Oz
    07/15 - start of classes (Bachelor in Nursing)
    05/16 - passed OET (after 4 failed attempts with IELTS and PTE)
    07/16 - finished uni
    07/16 - received AHPRA Australian Registered Nurse rego
    08/16 - student visa 500 (Diploma)
    10/16 - started working as an RN

    07/09/17 - Submitted EOI for State Nom Vic with 60points

    I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me

  • jon1101ajon1101a Baguio City, Philippines
    Posts: 88Member
    Ah see. Pero tama po ba yung mga requirements na sinend ko or kulang?. Sige po wait ko

    233914 - Engineering Technologist | Age: 30 pts | Education:15 pts | Experience : 5 pts | English:20 pts | Total:75 pts.

    01.12.17 - PTE take 1
    02.12.17 - PTE result competent : L-76, R-76, S-88, W-84 : 10 pts claimed
    02.13.17 - Updated EOI to VISA 189/190(NSW) (60/65)
    15.02.18 - PTE take 2
    16.02.18 - PTE result superior: L-79, R-80, S-90, W-79 : 20 pts claimed.
    17.02.18 - Updated EOI to VISA 189/190(NSW-VIC) (70/75)
    14.05.18 - Work experience milestone. 5 years
    Updated EOI to VISA 189/190(NSW-VIC) (75/80)
    11.08.18 - Invitation Received EOI 189. Finally. :D
    20.08.18 - 189 VISA lodge
    22.08.18 - Medicals at Nationwide
    07.11.18 - DIRECT GRANT after 80 days. :D

  • jon1101ajon1101a Baguio City, Philippines
    Posts: 88Member
    @ceinau15 Hi. Engineering technologist po. Kayo po?

    233914 - Engineering Technologist | Age: 30 pts | Education:15 pts | Experience : 5 pts | English:20 pts | Total:75 pts.

    01.12.17 - PTE take 1
    02.12.17 - PTE result competent : L-76, R-76, S-88, W-84 : 10 pts claimed
    02.13.17 - Updated EOI to VISA 189/190(NSW) (60/65)
    15.02.18 - PTE take 2
    16.02.18 - PTE result superior: L-79, R-80, S-90, W-79 : 20 pts claimed.
    17.02.18 - Updated EOI to VISA 189/190(NSW-VIC) (70/75)
    14.05.18 - Work experience milestone. 5 years
    Updated EOI to VISA 189/190(NSW-VIC) (75/80)
    11.08.18 - Invitation Received EOI 189. Finally. :D
    20.08.18 - 189 VISA lodge
    22.08.18 - Medicals at Nationwide
    07.11.18 - DIRECT GRANT after 80 days. :D

  • choknatzchoknatz Singapore
    Posts: 89Member
    @goodminton good morning! Ask ko lng po after mo mareceive pre invite from VIC and submitted all the documents via their website, may nareceive ka ba Ng acknowledgement from them? I’ve completed this step last Saturday(SG time), but until now walang any receipt from them. Ganito po ba talaga? Thanks
  • goodmintongoodminton Posts: 36Member
    @choknatz hello. may ganito kong nareceive —— we will respond to you by email within one week to confirm receipt of your application and advise your reference number. Processing of your application will take up to 12 weeks. baka po kasi holiday kahapon kaya wla pa. un after one week vineverify ko pa sa agent ko kun nakareceive kmi ng confirmation at ref number. balikan kita pag sumagot na sya
  • choknatzchoknatz Singapore
    Posts: 89Member
    @goodminton aw, cguro nga. Hopefully mareceive kahit acknowledgment man Lang within this wk. Thank you very much.
  • PebblesPebbles Melbourne
    Posts: 112Member
    hi @kymme ...DG ka db? ask lng nung ng apply ka visa... ano status ng application mo before mo nareceive ang grant letter? under received ba or naging assessment in progress status mo at one point??? alam mo ba when sila ngstart ng assessment mo?

    1month plus na kc application ko at received parin status ko... mag expired na ang medical ko this 21st.... i am hoping for DG din kc before my medical expires sana.... so dko alam kung my pag asa ma DG ak based sa "received" status ko ngyn

    thanks...
  • bettyboopbettyboop Victoria, Australia
    Posts: 146Member
    Hi tanong ko lng sa mga nag lodge ng visa sa VIC SS w dependent.. did u frontload the form 1221? Required po ba ito?kasi thru agent kami at parang wala ako ma remember na pinagsubmit kami ng 1221 although sabi nya frontloaded na daw lahat ng required docs..we lodge our visa last dec 24 2017 and receivrd status pa din until now.
  • kymmekymme Western Australia
    Posts: 1,286Member
    @Pebbles hi sis. di ko lam sa status kasi nka agent ako. DG ako. bago lahat medicals namin ni hubby e kasi expire na yung previous one ko. tricky yan kasi may kakilala ako, 4 months pa lng medicals nya pro pinaulit na CO contact xa. may frnd din ako na nag expire medical while waiting for decision pro DG p din. dpende na tlga sa CO. i think it takes 6-8 weeks for them to have a look at the docs. kasi 35 days yung DG ko including weekends

    Registered Nurse Nec

    06/15 - touchdown Oz
    07/15 - start of classes (Bachelor in Nursing)
    05/16 - passed OET (after 4 failed attempts with IELTS and PTE)
    07/16 - finished uni
    07/16 - received AHPRA Australian Registered Nurse rego
    08/16 - student visa 500 (Diploma)
    10/16 - started working as an RN

    07/09/17 - Submitted EOI for State Nom Vic with 60points

    I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me

  • kymmekymme Western Australia
    Posts: 1,286Member
    @bettyboop Hi. form 80 kung sinali nmin sa front load. wla ng 1221. DG p din

    Registered Nurse Nec

    06/15 - touchdown Oz
    07/15 - start of classes (Bachelor in Nursing)
    05/16 - passed OET (after 4 failed attempts with IELTS and PTE)
    07/16 - finished uni
    07/16 - received AHPRA Australian Registered Nurse rego
    08/16 - student visa 500 (Diploma)
    10/16 - started working as an RN

    07/09/17 - Submitted EOI for State Nom Vic with 60points

    I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me

  • Hunter_08Hunter_08 Adelaide
    Posts: 1,962Member
    @Pebbles normal yang received na status. mostly nagiging assessment in progress pag na CO contact ka pero sabi mo one month pala since nag lodge ka ng visa mo so malabo na maasikaso ka ng CO agad kasi yung iba more than 2 months na wala pa din update sa application nila.. tanong lang pala bakit mag eexpire na agad yung medical mo?

    Apr 26, 2013 ACS Result- Suitable
    Feb 21,2013 Submitted ACS online assessment - Software Tester


    May 9, 2016 PTE Exam Result L/R/S/W- 71/69/83/72 Passed Thank you Papa Jesus
    Aug 18,2016 ACS Result- Suitable -Software Engineer
    Aug 19, 2016 Lodged EOI for subclass 190
    July 13, 2017 Lodged EOI and Submitted Application for subclass 489
    Aug 12, 2017 ITA Received
    Aug 25,2017 Scheduled Medical Test
    Aug 28, 2017 Medical Cleared(No Action Required)
    Aug 30, 2017 NBI Clearance PH
    Sept 15, 2017 SG COC Fingerprint and Collection
    Sept 20, 2017 Visa Lodge
    Nov 1, 2017 CO Contact (Requesting to Send PTE Score Report to DIBP which I already did before)

    Mar 6, 2018 Visa Grant

    Visa 887 Timeline

    July 2020 Visa Submission

    *****Dream big, think positive and Pray to God*****

  • Hunter_08Hunter_08 Adelaide
    Posts: 1,962Member
    @bettyboop hindi naman required tlga yung form 1221 and for 80 but mas okay na mag upload ka na nyan kasi merong mga CO na nag rerequest nyan kaya much better to have one para wala ng hingin pa yung CO.. madali lang naman sya sagutan at maikli lang.

    Apr 26, 2013 ACS Result- Suitable
    Feb 21,2013 Submitted ACS online assessment - Software Tester


    May 9, 2016 PTE Exam Result L/R/S/W- 71/69/83/72 Passed Thank you Papa Jesus
    Aug 18,2016 ACS Result- Suitable -Software Engineer
    Aug 19, 2016 Lodged EOI for subclass 190
    July 13, 2017 Lodged EOI and Submitted Application for subclass 489
    Aug 12, 2017 ITA Received
    Aug 25,2017 Scheduled Medical Test
    Aug 28, 2017 Medical Cleared(No Action Required)
    Aug 30, 2017 NBI Clearance PH
    Sept 15, 2017 SG COC Fingerprint and Collection
    Sept 20, 2017 Visa Lodge
    Nov 1, 2017 CO Contact (Requesting to Send PTE Score Report to DIBP which I already did before)

    Mar 6, 2018 Visa Grant

    Visa 887 Timeline

    July 2020 Visa Submission

    *****Dream big, think positive and Pray to God*****

  • PebblesPebbles Melbourne
    Posts: 112Member
    @Hunter_08 hi hunter... ngwwork nko dito sa Melbourne.. ung medical na gamit ko ung medical ko last year sa student visa application ko... next week mag expire ang medical ko.... PERO... before ako nglodge ng PR visa ko nka request pko ng Health medical ek ek sa IMMI so meron akong extra HAP ID dito na hnde ko pa nagamit...

    my idea kb kung pwde ako mag medical na ngyn using ung HAP ID na meron ako or hntayin ko ma CO contact ako at bigyan nya ko HAP ID?? aykoooo kc ma CO at maghintay ule... =(
  • PebblesPebbles Melbourne
    Posts: 112Member
    @Hunter_08 my appointment ako ng medical bukas... $460 aud... shux... tpos bka bigyan ule ako HAP ID ng CO ko nextym dhil hnde sila pwde malink.... talon nlng ak sa ilog pag ganun.... hahahah
  • chococrinklechococrinkle Adelaide
    Posts: 571Member
    @Pebbles ang medical ng student visa is different sa skilled visa kasi merong hiv test sa skilled. If you have the HAP ID I think much better if magpa medical ka na. If Feb ka nag lodge baka more than 1month pa matitingnan yung application mo kasi ako Jan 4 lodgement received status pa din.

    2014 -- start of Au dream
    06.07.14 -- IELTS LRWS 7.5/7.5/7.0/7.0
    07.18.14 -- positive skills assessment
    08.01.14 -- waiting for occupation in ACT to open
    08.01.15 -- still waiting for occupation in ACT to open
    08.01.16 -- still waiting for occupation in ACT to open
    06.07.17 -- expired IELTS
    07.18.17 -- expired skills assessment
    08.2017 -- learned high points via SA 489
    11.22.17 -- PTE Academic exam LRWS 90/79/90/90
    11.22.17 -- result of Vetassess assessment renewal
    11.30.17 -- EOI lodge SA 489 80 pts
    12.22.17 -- received SA invitation
    01.04.18 -- Visa Lodge SA 489
    01.19.18 -- Medicals
    04.10.18 -- Visa Grant (DG) Praise God!!!


    PTE Writing Tips

    For writing essay I used E2 language format and applying what I learned from Ielts. Sa intro, sa 1st sentence ni restate ko lang yung question using my own words. Then sa 2nd sentence if one sided lang yung question, I give summary of the reasons ( 2 reasons only). Example, if ang essay is about importance of computers (one sided), eto 2nd sentence ko. Computers are valuable resources as they (1st reason) aid in learning and are (2nd reason) used to communicate with others. Then sa 3rd sentence sasabihin ko para pampahaba-- In this essay, I shall discuss my point of view by giving points and examples about the topic.

    Then sa 2nd paragraph, elaborate ko na ang 1St reason. Mga 2 sentences na magsupport sa 1st reason, like if yung 1st reason ko is aid in learning, expand ko ang topic by answering how computers aid in learning,etc. Usually yung reason mo convert mo by asking how, what, when, or who. Tapos sa 3rd sentence, I state examples. Pwede ka din mag add pa ng 4th sentence parang isummarize mo lang ang 2nd paragraph.

    Sa 3rd paragraph discuss naman ang 3rd reason same sa ginawa sa 2nd par.

    4Th paragraph 1st sentence conclusion, then 2nd sentence recommendation.

    If 2 sided naman yung intro pwede mo gamitin yung nasa template like kina Heprex na samples. Then yung 2nd par yung kabilang side, then yung 3rd paragraph yung other side. Tapos same last paragraph.

    If medyo nahihirapan ka sa mga ideas, research ka dito sa forum ng mga recent topics. Tapos based dun sa topic reasearch ka anong pwedeng maging points and reasons para may idea ka na ano ilalagay mo sa essay.

    Ang key talaga sa writing is dapat marami ka ideas. If nahihirapan ka mag construct ng idea try to research as much as possible. Google mo yung mga common or recent topics on pte writing tapos may mga sample questions dun,, then research mo ano possible answers para sa actual exam may idea kana ano isasagot. Tapos dpat familiarize mo mga connectors (like moreover, therefore, for instance, etc) kasi mas mataas ang grade kapag medyo complex ang sentence na ginagamit mo kesa simple sentences lang.

    For summarize written text strategy ko is to first get ano main topic. Then analyze what important points were given, may nangyari ba? If meron ano ang nangyari, kelan nangyari? ano at para kanino ang purpose? Usually kasi sa mga paragraphs naka detail lang pero yung point lang naman dun is parang dinedescribe lang yung main topic. If you can answer who/what, when, how and why about the topic pwede mo na pagdugtungin yung ideas mo thru connectors and form a sentence. If you will have multiple paragraphs, summarize mo muna per paragraph then summarize mo ulit lahat in one sentence

    Another tip also in writing as much as possible do not repeat the same words. If you dont have much stored knowledge about synonyms okay lang. Practice and Research is the key. Kaya malaki ang help sa akin yung pag research sa mga common or recent topics kasi while practicing pwede akong mghanap ng synonyms then mas madali ko syang ma recall sa actual exam kasi nagawa ko na sya before. Tapos if meron kayong word na ma encounter na parang hirap kayo mag elaborate, google nyo din anong synonym or phrases na pwedeng same meaning ng word. Share ko yung nilista kong mga synonyms na possible na magagamit sa mga essay kasi minsan these are the topics commonly asked.

    Essay synonyms

    Discuss- cite, mention, illustrate, narrate, elucidate, talk about

    Finally.. Concluded, In Summary

    Democracy- representative govt; elective govt; republic; commonwealth

    Vote- suffrage, ballot, poll, elect officials, select leaders, appoint, designate

    Leaders- officials, officer, commander, chief, head, principal of nations, pioneer, front runner

    Nature- mother earth, environment, wildlife, universe, cosmos, countryside, natural resources, natural world

    Environment- habitat, territory, domain, surroundings

    Teachers- educator, tutor, coach,guide, mentor, guru, professor, trainer, lecturer

    Computer- PC, laptop, netbook,desktop, terminal, mainframe

    Robot- automated individual, android, automaton, golem, bot, droid,

    Invention- creation, innovation, development, design

    Creative ability- inventive mind, originality, imagination, inspiration

    Airplane- plane, airliner, jet, plane

    Drugs- medicine, medication, remedy, cure, antidote

    Issue- matter, affairs, problem, difficulty, obstacle, predicament

    Information- details, particulars, facts, data, computing /computer

    Revolution- insurgence, transformation, innovation, revolt, uprising, restructuring

    Packaging- case, wrap

    Region, province, rural area, district, territory, district, area

    Boon- blessing, benefit, advantage

    Tourist- traveler, vacationer, visitor

    Tourism- visits to places of interest; commercial organization and operation of vacations; traveling to places; services provided to people for holidays

    Technology- invention, engineering, applied science, method, technical knowledge, undustrial science, mechanization

    Xenophobic- anti nationalist

  • Hunter_08Hunter_08 Adelaide
    Posts: 1,962Member
    @Pebbles tama si @chococrinkle hindi same ang medical ng student visa sa skilled visa kaya much better kung makapag medical ka ulit para iwas CO contact ka na.

    Apr 26, 2013 ACS Result- Suitable
    Feb 21,2013 Submitted ACS online assessment - Software Tester


    May 9, 2016 PTE Exam Result L/R/S/W- 71/69/83/72 Passed Thank you Papa Jesus
    Aug 18,2016 ACS Result- Suitable -Software Engineer
    Aug 19, 2016 Lodged EOI for subclass 190
    July 13, 2017 Lodged EOI and Submitted Application for subclass 489
    Aug 12, 2017 ITA Received
    Aug 25,2017 Scheduled Medical Test
    Aug 28, 2017 Medical Cleared(No Action Required)
    Aug 30, 2017 NBI Clearance PH
    Sept 15, 2017 SG COC Fingerprint and Collection
    Sept 20, 2017 Visa Lodge
    Nov 1, 2017 CO Contact (Requesting to Send PTE Score Report to DIBP which I already did before)

    Mar 6, 2018 Visa Grant

    Visa 887 Timeline

    July 2020 Visa Submission

    *****Dream big, think positive and Pray to God*****

  • kymmekymme Western Australia
    Posts: 1,286Member
    @Hunter_08 @chococrinkle same lang yung medicals ko from 2 student visas until 190. nka x3 medicals ako, same lang lahat. bsta lang maideclare na nsa medical field ka ng work.

    Registered Nurse Nec

    06/15 - touchdown Oz
    07/15 - start of classes (Bachelor in Nursing)
    05/16 - passed OET (after 4 failed attempts with IELTS and PTE)
    07/16 - finished uni
    07/16 - received AHPRA Australian Registered Nurse rego
    08/16 - student visa 500 (Diploma)
    10/16 - started working as an RN

    07/09/17 - Submitted EOI for State Nom Vic with 60points

    I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me

  • PebblesPebbles Melbourne
    Posts: 112Member
    @Hunter_08 @chococrinkle ung medical test ko last yr same lang sa skilled visa... cgro kc under healthcare ako?? dko alam... perl my HIV, hep c and b, xray ako from lastyr...

    kttwag king home affairs...nghintay ako sa queue pang 102 ako... hahhaa advice skn e... mag email sa allocation team...para sbhn na may new HAP ID ak... etc etc...

    nbuksan nb application mo @chococrinkle ??
  • bettyboopbettyboop Victoria, Australia
    Posts: 146Member
    @kymme and @Hunter_08 salamat sa advise naka agent kasi kami..at sabi nya wala na daw iba forms or docs na required..pero sa nababasa ko dito nag frontload mostly ng form 80 or 1221.

    If naka agent kayo. Sinabi ba sa agent nyo na mag submit ng form na yun or kayo nag push na e frontload yun?

    At sa dependent need ba e submit ang educational docs? Or para sa primary applicant lng yun?hindi din kasi hiningi yun sa agent namin.
  • kymmekymme Western Australia
    Posts: 1,286Member
    @bettyboop Hi. may agent ako, si RPS. pina front load nya yung form 80 but not 1221.

    for dependent, i submitted marriage contract, tor, diploma, cert of english as medium of instruction (instead of taking ielts), employment docs from Ph, PRC docs.

    Registered Nurse Nec

    06/15 - touchdown Oz
    07/15 - start of classes (Bachelor in Nursing)
    05/16 - passed OET (after 4 failed attempts with IELTS and PTE)
    07/16 - finished uni
    07/16 - received AHPRA Australian Registered Nurse rego
    08/16 - student visa 500 (Diploma)
    10/16 - started working as an RN

    07/09/17 - Submitted EOI for State Nom Vic with 60points

    I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me

  • bettyboopbettyboop Victoria, Australia
    Posts: 146Member
    @kymme hindi naghingi ang agent ng form 80. Nung ask kami if meron pa docs or forms required.. wala na daw.
    Yung sa akin as dependent eto lng sinubmit nya marriage cert, nbi, SG COC,passport,birth cert, english medium of instruction/PTE.

    Sa AU naka based agent namin at immigration lawyer din sya.. onshore kami nag lodge ng visa and currently on bridging visa..
    D ko alam if aim ba nya ang DG or nag aantay sya ng CO contact..
  • PebblesPebbles Melbourne
    Posts: 112Member
    @kymme pano ang cert na english ang gamit sa school?
  • chococrinklechococrinkle Adelaide
    Posts: 571Member
    @kymme @Pebbles ah ok so if may hiv test na din so accepted na din yun dapat. Though yung kay Pebbles is expiring na. Much better nga to check with DHA nalang to be sure. :-)

    2014 -- start of Au dream
    06.07.14 -- IELTS LRWS 7.5/7.5/7.0/7.0
    07.18.14 -- positive skills assessment
    08.01.14 -- waiting for occupation in ACT to open
    08.01.15 -- still waiting for occupation in ACT to open
    08.01.16 -- still waiting for occupation in ACT to open
    06.07.17 -- expired IELTS
    07.18.17 -- expired skills assessment
    08.2017 -- learned high points via SA 489
    11.22.17 -- PTE Academic exam LRWS 90/79/90/90
    11.22.17 -- result of Vetassess assessment renewal
    11.30.17 -- EOI lodge SA 489 80 pts
    12.22.17 -- received SA invitation
    01.04.18 -- Visa Lodge SA 489
    01.19.18 -- Medicals
    04.10.18 -- Visa Grant (DG) Praise God!!!


    PTE Writing Tips

    For writing essay I used E2 language format and applying what I learned from Ielts. Sa intro, sa 1st sentence ni restate ko lang yung question using my own words. Then sa 2nd sentence if one sided lang yung question, I give summary of the reasons ( 2 reasons only). Example, if ang essay is about importance of computers (one sided), eto 2nd sentence ko. Computers are valuable resources as they (1st reason) aid in learning and are (2nd reason) used to communicate with others. Then sa 3rd sentence sasabihin ko para pampahaba-- In this essay, I shall discuss my point of view by giving points and examples about the topic.

    Then sa 2nd paragraph, elaborate ko na ang 1St reason. Mga 2 sentences na magsupport sa 1st reason, like if yung 1st reason ko is aid in learning, expand ko ang topic by answering how computers aid in learning,etc. Usually yung reason mo convert mo by asking how, what, when, or who. Tapos sa 3rd sentence, I state examples. Pwede ka din mag add pa ng 4th sentence parang isummarize mo lang ang 2nd paragraph.

    Sa 3rd paragraph discuss naman ang 3rd reason same sa ginawa sa 2nd par.

    4Th paragraph 1st sentence conclusion, then 2nd sentence recommendation.

    If 2 sided naman yung intro pwede mo gamitin yung nasa template like kina Heprex na samples. Then yung 2nd par yung kabilang side, then yung 3rd paragraph yung other side. Tapos same last paragraph.

    If medyo nahihirapan ka sa mga ideas, research ka dito sa forum ng mga recent topics. Tapos based dun sa topic reasearch ka anong pwedeng maging points and reasons para may idea ka na ano ilalagay mo sa essay.

    Ang key talaga sa writing is dapat marami ka ideas. If nahihirapan ka mag construct ng idea try to research as much as possible. Google mo yung mga common or recent topics on pte writing tapos may mga sample questions dun,, then research mo ano possible answers para sa actual exam may idea kana ano isasagot. Tapos dpat familiarize mo mga connectors (like moreover, therefore, for instance, etc) kasi mas mataas ang grade kapag medyo complex ang sentence na ginagamit mo kesa simple sentences lang.

    For summarize written text strategy ko is to first get ano main topic. Then analyze what important points were given, may nangyari ba? If meron ano ang nangyari, kelan nangyari? ano at para kanino ang purpose? Usually kasi sa mga paragraphs naka detail lang pero yung point lang naman dun is parang dinedescribe lang yung main topic. If you can answer who/what, when, how and why about the topic pwede mo na pagdugtungin yung ideas mo thru connectors and form a sentence. If you will have multiple paragraphs, summarize mo muna per paragraph then summarize mo ulit lahat in one sentence

    Another tip also in writing as much as possible do not repeat the same words. If you dont have much stored knowledge about synonyms okay lang. Practice and Research is the key. Kaya malaki ang help sa akin yung pag research sa mga common or recent topics kasi while practicing pwede akong mghanap ng synonyms then mas madali ko syang ma recall sa actual exam kasi nagawa ko na sya before. Tapos if meron kayong word na ma encounter na parang hirap kayo mag elaborate, google nyo din anong synonym or phrases na pwedeng same meaning ng word. Share ko yung nilista kong mga synonyms na possible na magagamit sa mga essay kasi minsan these are the topics commonly asked.

    Essay synonyms

    Discuss- cite, mention, illustrate, narrate, elucidate, talk about

    Finally.. Concluded, In Summary

    Democracy- representative govt; elective govt; republic; commonwealth

    Vote- suffrage, ballot, poll, elect officials, select leaders, appoint, designate

    Leaders- officials, officer, commander, chief, head, principal of nations, pioneer, front runner

    Nature- mother earth, environment, wildlife, universe, cosmos, countryside, natural resources, natural world

    Environment- habitat, territory, domain, surroundings

    Teachers- educator, tutor, coach,guide, mentor, guru, professor, trainer, lecturer

    Computer- PC, laptop, netbook,desktop, terminal, mainframe

    Robot- automated individual, android, automaton, golem, bot, droid,

    Invention- creation, innovation, development, design

    Creative ability- inventive mind, originality, imagination, inspiration

    Airplane- plane, airliner, jet, plane

    Drugs- medicine, medication, remedy, cure, antidote

    Issue- matter, affairs, problem, difficulty, obstacle, predicament

    Information- details, particulars, facts, data, computing /computer

    Revolution- insurgence, transformation, innovation, revolt, uprising, restructuring

    Packaging- case, wrap

    Region, province, rural area, district, territory, district, area

    Boon- blessing, benefit, advantage

    Tourist- traveler, vacationer, visitor

    Tourism- visits to places of interest; commercial organization and operation of vacations; traveling to places; services provided to people for holidays

    Technology- invention, engineering, applied science, method, technical knowledge, undustrial science, mechanization

    Xenophobic- anti nationalist

  • kymmekymme Western Australia
    Posts: 1,286Member
    @bettyboop although form 80 is not included sa required docs, may ibang CO kasi n nghihingi and un reason ng CO contact. kya yung samin, pinasa nlng namin. ayun na DG kmi in 35 days. nag aavoid lng kmi CO contact. wla nmn mawawala pag pinasa namin.

    Registered Nurse Nec

    06/15 - touchdown Oz
    07/15 - start of classes (Bachelor in Nursing)
    05/16 - passed OET (after 4 failed attempts with IELTS and PTE)
    07/16 - finished uni
    07/16 - received AHPRA Australian Registered Nurse rego
    08/16 - student visa 500 (Diploma)
    10/16 - started working as an RN

    07/09/17 - Submitted EOI for State Nom Vic with 60points

    I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me

  • kymmekymme Western Australia
    Posts: 1,286Member
    @Pebbles bsta nkpag tapos ng bachelor degree in Ph, hingi k lng nun sa university. pra di na mag english test ang dependent

    Registered Nurse Nec

    06/15 - touchdown Oz
    07/15 - start of classes (Bachelor in Nursing)
    05/16 - passed OET (after 4 failed attempts with IELTS and PTE)
    07/16 - finished uni
    07/16 - received AHPRA Australian Registered Nurse rego
    08/16 - student visa 500 (Diploma)
    10/16 - started working as an RN

    07/09/17 - Submitted EOI for State Nom Vic with 60points

    I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me

  • kymmekymme Western Australia
    Posts: 1,286Member
    @chococrinkle preach. better check with DHA or immi kung need pa ba. tricky kasi yung validity ng medicals

    Registered Nurse Nec

    06/15 - touchdown Oz
    07/15 - start of classes (Bachelor in Nursing)
    05/16 - passed OET (after 4 failed attempts with IELTS and PTE)
    07/16 - finished uni
    07/16 - received AHPRA Australian Registered Nurse rego
    08/16 - student visa 500 (Diploma)
    10/16 - started working as an RN

    07/09/17 - Submitted EOI for State Nom Vic with 60points

    I can do all things through Christ who strengthens me

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