<i>These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour.
Do you agree or disagree?</i>
Truly there is a huge gap in terms of regulating television shows nowadays. The entertainment business at the present seemed to be more daring in creating shows that are to violent and vulgar. And as a result, the young ones’ attitudes are easily influenced. Although it is argued on both sides, I am deeply convinced that the authorities should carry out the most appropriate action on this matter.
Firstly, the existence of inappropriate scenes in every movies or television shows could probably corrupt young subtle minds as they may find it righteous to imitate. In lack of parental guidance, children may be harmed in doing such stunts that they thought it is just so easy to execute as seen on television or theatres. For example, seeing two wrestlers rumbling inside the ring, one would suddenly pick-up a folding chair and smashes into his opponent’s head. Although, we as adults know that the stunt is faked, we will never expect the children to absorb the stunt as unreal. Thus, when a child goes to school he may apply those actions to his peers.
Moreover, a further aspect that convinces the children to be violent is when they see revenge scenes. Their temper gets triggered and displays a hostile attitude as they get agitated. In this case, a negative impact can be seen clearly, of which later we will suffer on if we just tolerate our children remain watching these vicious shows.
In conclusion, despite of their curiosity, it is still suitable to prohibit our children from watching violent television shows. We should persist in pursuing our advocacy against violence especially when younger people are involved.
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