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ImB

@sonsi_03, salamat po 🙂

ImB

@filipinacpa ni-pm ko sayo yung email ko.

sonsi_03

@filipinacpa thanks!

ImB

@filipinacpa, nareceived ko yung email mo. Thank you 🙂

filipinacpa

Welcome, uploading pa yung IELTS Trainer.. I forward ko nalang po yun next..

IDP or BC? IDP or BC? Lol. Wait ko muna mga results this week or wait ko result mo @sonsi_03 sa IDP. Hehe.

filipinacpa

Guys, eto nalang po pa-download nalang from Dropbox yung ielts trainer.. Di ko ma-attach sa Yahoo Mail eh..

https://www.dropbox.com/s/oypyy2jq28jxzn0/IELTS%20Trainer%20Practice%20Tests%20with%20answers.pdf

imeetr

@filipinacpa Thanks sa link. 🙂

filipinacpa

Ay, sorry. Wala pa pala yung compilation ng audios. Bale 3 CDs po ito. Upload ko tonight sa dropbox nalang din po. Bigay ko nalang ulit link. Sana makatulong. 🙂

imeetr

@filipinacpa IDP na lang tayo, para mag meet tayo on the exam day. 🙂 IDP kasi ako ulit.

cyren18

@filipinacpa hi pede po makiki-share din ng ielts reviewers thank you. eto po email add ko sai541@yahoo.com tnx sobra!

imeetr

@cyren18 ano po mga reviewer ang kailangan mo Cambridge 1-9? May dropbox account ka ba?

imeetr

@cyren18 here's my link for Cambridge 1-9

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/mkpxf2trdtg1z7h/Y-maeOZlkL

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/jvsn634xsi0swpx/pU8B1T5aTi

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/exoamqm0c3jq4jw/vCyswAxteD

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/szof6pn5e5pebtp/M38MKs9YIU

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/zgb49my2jlr9pph/tepQiNbQNb

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/kb73aig3gw9zasv/8-FTdC8Wkr

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/79lj7dty3yeobed/lMzsZempS0

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/jut95we84aszuxa/dgxPTyL-K8

https://www.dropbox.com/sh/b666h56nzsmh815/rDQTFu5Y9l

AnnieIngles

@chu_se Anong line ka ng engineering? If you don't mind my asking..

chu_se

@annielngles..Industrial Engineering po

sonsi_03

<blockquote rel="filipinacpa">Welcome, uploading pa yung IELTS Trainer.. I forward ko nalang po yun next..

IDP or BC? IDP or BC? Lol. Wait ko muna mga results this week or wait ko result mo @sonsi_03 sa IDP. Hehe.</blockquote>

haha, sige @filipinacpa ako ang guinea pig ngayon test water tayo

😃

sonsi_03

Meron po akong Writing Essay part 2 na gawa today, I would like to share it with you and hope you can comment. Thanks.

Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

                       The idea of some people that women shall be able to join military on any of its sectors has raised several debates among society. I certainly agree that it should be allowed for these couple of justified reasons.	
	
                       The main reason why women should be accepted in the national defence is that they are more giving out the sense of commitment and responsibility than the opposite sex. They are the genuine testimonies of an unconditional passion and dedication to play their roles in serving their own country. To illustrate this, it is very natural for women to protect their loved ones and would sacrifice everything whatever it takes. This valuable trait of women is an essential factor that government should appreciate and never underestimate.
	
                        Another reason why is that, we have already migrated long ago from old traditions. Ever since we entered the new millennium, the dramatic change for gender equality has brought vast benefits throughout the generations. A good example is in terms of political aspect where some countries have elected lady presidents and they have proven that a woman can lead a nation towards progressive directions the likes of Aung Saan Su Kyi of Myanmar and Cory Aquino of the Philippines and many more. These women have done their jobs proficiently and excellently with their pure hearts, patriotism and motherly love.   
	
                         For the reasons stated above, I come to a conclusion that women are much qualified to join the armed and not to be restricted. Drawing the line between genders is a clear means of violating the human rights and denying equal rights.

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filipinacpa

Here's the link for the audio of IELTS Trainer:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/gb9g2ycj2srpoj6/Audios%20for%20Ielts%20Trainer.zip

Thankies..

filipinacpa

I'm not really good at this but I'll try. 🙂

<blockquote rel="sonsi_03">Meron po akong Writing Essay part 2 na gawa today, I would like to share it with you and hope you can comment. Thanks. </blockquote>

Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force just like men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

                       The idea <b>of some people</b> (I think this phrase can be remove) that women shall be able to join <b>military on any of its sectors </b> (or "any sectors of armed forces") has raised several debates among society. <b>I certainly agree that it should be allowed for these couple of justified reasons.	</b> (or, "For a couple of justified reasons, I certainly agree that they should be allowed.")
	
                       The main reason why women should be accepted in the national <b>defence</b> (should be "defense") is that they are <b>more</b> (remove) giving out <b>the</b> (remove) ("more") sense of commitment and responsibility than <b>the</b> ("their") opposite sex. They are the genuine testimonies of an unconditional passion and dedication to play their roles in serving their own country. To illustrate this, it is very natural for women to protect their loved ones and would sacrifice everything whatever it takes. This (should be "These" as it refers to two ideas, protect their loved ones and would sacrifice...") valuable <b>trait </b> (traits) of women is ("are") an (remove) essential factor that government should appreciate and never underestimate.
	
                        Another reason <b>why </b> (remove) is that, we have already migrated long ago from old traditions. Ever since we entered the new millennium, the dramatic change <b>for</b> (should be "of") gender equality has brought vast benefits throughout the generations. A good example is in terms of political aspect (followed by "comma") where some countries have elected lady presidents and they have proven that a woman can lead a nation towards progressive directions<b> the likes of </b> (", such as") Aung Saan Su Kyi of Myanmar and Cory Aquino of the Philippines and many more. These women have done their jobs proficiently and excellently with <b>their </b> (remove) pure hearts, patriotism and motherly love.   
	
                         For the reasons stated above, I come to a conclusion that women are much qualified to join the armed ("forces") and not to be restricted. Drawing the line between genders is a clear means of violating the human rights and denying equal rights.

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sonsi_03

@filipinacpa nice! thanks for the effort, anu sa tingin mo ang band score?

filipinacpa

<blockquote rel="sonsi_03">@filipinacpa nice! thanks for the effort, anu sa tingin mo ang band score? </blockquote>

Yikes! I can't decide, I am not really sure. But I completely understood the thoughts of your essay.

When writing my own, I make sure to comply on the following points:

1)The introduction should be consistent to the conclusion; (which I think you did)

2)Follow the ideal essay structure based on the given task (I think you got this)

3)Answer the question thoroughly by providing examples or explaining it further (which I also think you did)

Add-ons: proper usage of vocabularies, linking words, spellings, grammars, proper capitalizations and proper punctuation marks..

Though I'd suggest you add more on the introduction by providing a general reason as to why you agree on the issue..

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