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First and foremost, sorry mahaba post ko. Hehe.
Isinave ko yung mga writing activities ko sa mock exams, stagnant and consistent sa writing = 77 yung scores ko. Any suggestions mga writer masters para maka 79+ man lang? GODbless.
@MLBS, I tried gamitin yung ibang mga connectors, transition words and some phrases mo sa essays ko. Thanks ng marami. I wonder bket hndi ko makuha yung 79+. May kulang pa kaya ako. Thanks a lot!
SWT1:
Space experts have long worried that orbital debris might one day smash a spacecraft into hundreds of pieces and start a chain reaction, spreading chaos through the heavens. In the last decade, as scientists came to agree that the number of objects in orbit had surpassed a critical mass, they grew more anxious. Early this year, the list of detectable objects (four inches wide or larger) reached 10,000. If these experts' predictions are right, billions of dollars' worth of advanced satellites are at risk.
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Costly space satellites may get hit by the huge space detritus, and astronomers were truly afraid that it will definitely happen sooner which can cause some detrimental effects.</b>
SWT2:
A coffee drinker in San Francisco has little chance of ever meeting the small-scale farmer in Nicaragua who may have raised the original coffee beans. However, if the coffee drinker has bought "Fair Trade" beans, he or she has made a conscious effort to support the coffee producer with a fair wage. Goods that are certified as "Fair Trade" are priced a little higher than the market rate, with the premium routed to the small rural producer in the form of a slightly higher profit. The Fair Trade concept aims to bring small farmers a fair price for their products and to support sustainable and socially responsible production methods. Fair Trade is thus one of the more benign faces of globalization, with the potential to connect poor rural producers with global markets. Besides coffee, Fair Trade items include tea, cocoa, sugar, honey, bananas, fresh fruit and vegetables, dried fruit, fruit juices, rice, wine, nuts and oilseeds, cut flowers, ornamental plants, cotton, and a variety of handmade crafts - but coffee remains the core of the Fair Trade system.
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Fair Trade system was focused to unite the provicial manufacturers to the global market by selling goods at some reasonable price, and people can support peasants by buying Fair Trade products in which the excess profit will be given back to them.</b>
Essay1:
Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree?
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Nowadays, there is an ongoing debate between people whether ferocity plays an important role in a dramatic increase of unlawful acts, or it is not affecting. Although some may claim that individual who watches gore movies will eventually become evil doers, my view is that it is unlikely to happen, so I disagree. This essay shall elucidate both sides of the assertion before deducing to an axiomatic conclusion.
Individuals are not becoming law breakers when watching blood scenes in television. There are several reasons why an individual will not become violators if they are watching brutal film. For instance, a citizen who watched the terrorists beheading an abducted hostage will definitely not try it to someone else, but they despised such cruelty. Thus, watching carnage videos are not a key factor why someone ends up in prison because of what they did.
Conversely, some people may insist that criminals were influenced by those blood movies. Those gullible person thinks that films affect the thinking of anyone. As an example, children are imitating what they watch, and they tend to give a try what they have saw. Finally, everyone is using their brain and will not do such an impulsive act to do a crime.
While there are strong contentions on both sides of the case, I strongly disagree that movies plays a significant role in law breakers lives. In hindsight, there are any other factors affecting attitude of a person aside from watching ferocious movies.</b>
Essay2:
'It is as important for school children to study music, art and sport as it is for them to become literate and numerate.' How far do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and / or examples from your own experience.
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Nowadays, there is an ongoing debate between people whether it is vital for a student to learn music, art and sport, or it is not important to focus on such matters. Although some may claim that it is not essential to become literate and numerate, my view is that studying music, art and sport has an impact to turn educated, so I definitely agree with this. This essay shall elucidate the assertion before deducing to an axiomatic conclusion.
Children who learn music, art and sport turns out to be more educated. There are several reasons why anyone attending music, art and sport schools becoming fast learners of anything. For instance, a child who is a product of talent school will eventually a top scorer in their class, and they tend to excel in anything. Thus, anyone can be great by learning music, art and sport.
Conversely, some people may insist that it is not such essential to learn extra curricular activities. Those gullible persons think that it is just a waste of time and money. As an example, anyone cannot focus on their major subjects because their time is divided. In hindsight, learners can get more talents when allotting a time on extra currilar activities.
While there are strong contentions on both sides of the case, I strongly agree that school children will become more literate and numerate if they invest some time on such activities.</b>
SST1:
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The orator discussed about the different definition of talents. She mentioned that it is sometimes hard to answer, and ability can be compared to employees in the companies. Furthermore, the lecturer talked about the talent that is useful for high level of analytical ability. Finally, she said that the most important thing about it is to use one brain for analytic purpose.</b>
SST2:
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The orator discussed about the vital role of vitamin D. First and foremost, she mentioned that it is sometimes essential for strong bone and teeth but absolutely that is not the main function of it. Furthermore, she talked about that vitamin D helps to maintain blood calcium level, and it is perilous if the count of it drops. Finally, she said that vitamin D used for enzyme and blood activity.
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