@Supersaiyan Heto sa akin sa SWT. Babalikan kita sa mga Essays mo soon. 🙂
Space experts have long worried that orbital debris might one day smash a spacecraft into hundreds of pieces and start a chain reaction, spreading chaos through the heavens. In the last decade, as scientists came to agree that the number of objects in orbit had surpassed a critical mass, they grew more anxious. Early this year, the list of detectable objects (four inches wide or larger) reached 10,000. If these experts' predictions are right, billions of dollars' worth of advanced satellites are at risk.
My Answer:
<i class="Italic">Space experts predict that orbital debris may soon damage several costly advance satellites due to the growing number of objects in orbit that reached above the critical mass with an actual number of 10,000 this year.</i>
A coffee drinker in San Francisco has little chance of ever meeting the small-scale farmer in Nicaragua who may have raised the original coffee beans. However, if the coffee drinker has bought "Fair Trade" beans, he or she has made a conscious effort to support the coffee producer with a fair wage. Goods that are certified as "Fair Trade" are priced a little higher than the market rate, with the premium routed to the small rural producer in the form of a slightly higher profit. The Fair Trade concept aims to bring small farmers a fair price for their products and to support sustainable and socially responsible production methods. Fair Trade is thus one of the more benign faces of globalization, with the potential to connect poor rural producers with global markets. Besides coffee, Fair Trade items include tea, cocoa, sugar, honey, bananas, fresh fruit and vegetables, dried fruit, fruit juices, rice, wine, nuts and oilseeds, cut flowers, ornamental plants, cotton, and a variety of handmade crafts - but coffee remains the core of the Fair Trade system.
My Answer
<i class="Italic">To support socially responsible farming methods, coffee drinkers need to buy Fair Trade beans which are priced a little higher than the market rate resulting to a slightly higher profit for small rural producers.</i>
Tips:
1)Write 30-40 words
2) Identify 3 important ideas in the passage and include it in the sentence through using connectors such as yet, but, however, which, that, with, until, due to....
3) Use synonyms for the key ideas you identified in the passage so it may not sound copied
4) Just use simple but academic vocabularies
Hope this helps for the Writing 🙂