PTE ACADEMIC

ceasarkho

@Supersaiyan, Ito ang version ko sa Essay 1 Paragraph2 mo. Madugo talaga pag less idea about sa topic.

Ito ang formula ko na hind madali rin I apply kasi kulan pa na practice.
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My rules for composing sentence
1. Sentence Writing starter
-Using the 5Ws and an H
-Sentence Pyramids
-Sentence Patterns
-Who - Did What - When - Where

2. Sentence structures: Simple, Compound, Complex (at least 1 complex sentence in 1 essay, I think will contribute big points)
3. Sentence flow: Sentence 1: S+V+O > Sentence 2: S(Sentence 1 Object)+V+O. Everything related to the essay prompt. Your paragraph or sentence must echo the topic/main idea of your essay.
4. Check your essay prompt and mind map if you fill lost.
5. Collocations. Sabi ng E2, anything that sounds native English are valid. More reading. listening to podcasts, watch BBC news are recommended.
6. Apply synonyms if you have it. Avoid repetitive word.
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Divide and conquer muna. Argument paragraph muna. Itong part ang very challenging sa akin. Extract ko yung Essay 1, Paragraph 2 mo.

Essay1:
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Violence portrayed on TV and in the movies leads to an increase in crime in our society. People who watch violent movies are more likely to become criminals. Do you agree or disagree?
Pharagraph 2:
Individuals are not becoming law breakers when watching blood scenes in television. There are several reasons why an individual will not become violators if they are watching brutal film. For instance, a citizen who watched the terrorists beheading an abducted hostage will definitely not try it to someone else, but they despised such cruelty. Thus, watching carnage videos are not a key factor why someone ends up in prison because of what they did.
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My version:..
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Not perfect but at least we have something to compare and get comments from our kapatid na expert sa writing. I try to write with direct response sa prompt.

Violent movies have no influence on one's criminal behavior, it is the person's childhood emotional problem which was not addressed that caused a person to be gone astray.
A person's undesirable experiences in life created a bouncing effect which he inflicts to other person and where it becomes a cycle. There was a research conducted at the University of California among convicts in California State Prison to determine the root cause of cruel conducts committed by the offenders. It was found out that 100% of the participants of the experiments have an emotional problem since childhood and was deprived of family emotional support and victims of physical abuses. Thus, it is the lack of affection and care that leads a person to be a criminal.

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Supersaiyan

@ceasarkho, thanks sa feedback mo bro, big help sa aming nag struggle para maka superior sa writing yang comment mo. I see, nkita ko na difference, haha, mukang sa pag paraphrase ako nadale and lack of some supporting studies. So I must be wary na kpag nag paraphrase ako hndi kakabig sa ibang topic. Maraming salamat sa time sa pag construct ng isang part sa essay. GODbless.

Nga pala additionally bro, anong structure type mo sa essay. Ginagamit ko ksi saken yung kay E2Language. 3-4-4-2 Essay structure.

Sid Lim

mga bro anong voucher code ang pwedeng gamitin for PTE discount? di na gumagana yung PTE2015. as per @Heprex wala ng pwede magamit na discount code. any comment?

Supersaiyan

@Sid Lim, yup di na po sya gumagana, ang ginagawa po nmen is bumibili sa https://www.aeccglobal.com/ph/ptevoucher/ kaya lang pang PH lang po ata eto. Halos same dc po ata sya sa PTE2015.

Blackmamba

@ceasarkho mukang mas ready ka pa sakin bro sa writing, sinwerte lang ata ako since medyo familiar ako sa question. Simple lang naman sagot ko, just used connectors at examples at dapat di sabog ung idea mo. Yun ata reason at naka 90 ako.

Iniisip ko lang yung re order paragraph, pag binasa ba ng reader eh madali niya ma distinguish from a-z ung sentences.

ceasarkho

@Blackmamba Natural good writer ka nyan bro or whatever reason so many factors din involved. Naalala ko nung first take ko nka W76 ako pero not aware about E2Languange or Steven. Tinira ko lng at that time very cool lng wlang stress go with the flow sa pgsulat. Ngayon will full concepts sa E2 and Steven parang ang hirap ko gawin mg sulat. Kaya ito ngayon medyo pinag aaralan ko rin sarili ko. haha Desire ko talaga mlaman at least near perfect na formula pra mka 79 sa PTE writing. Tulong tulong na lng tayo lahat..

Blackmamba

@ceasarkho Kuha mo na yan next month, basta relax lang at wag masyado pressured para di mawala sa focus.

ceasarkho

@Blackmamba , correct ka dapat relax at no pressure. thank you.

lottysatty

@Supersaiyan Heto sa akin sa SWT. Babalikan kita sa mga Essays mo soon.

Space experts have long worried that orbital debris might one day smash a spacecraft into hundreds of pieces and start a chain reaction, spreading chaos through the heavens. In the last decade, as scientists came to agree that the number of objects in orbit had surpassed a critical mass, they grew more anxious. Early this year, the list of detectable objects (four inches wide or larger) reached 10,000. If these experts' predictions are right, billions of dollars' worth of advanced satellites are at risk.
My Answer:
Space experts predict that orbital debris may soon damage several costly advance satellites due to the growing number of objects in orbit that reached above the critical mass with an actual number of 10,000 this year.

A coffee drinker in San Francisco has little chance of ever meeting the small-scale farmer in Nicaragua who may have raised the original coffee beans. However, if the coffee drinker has bought "Fair Trade" beans, he or she has made a conscious effort to support the coffee producer with a fair wage. Goods that are certified as "Fair Trade" are priced a little higher than the market rate, with the premium routed to the small rural producer in the form of a slightly higher profit. The Fair Trade concept aims to bring small farmers a fair price for their products and to support sustainable and socially responsible production methods. Fair Trade is thus one of the more benign faces of globalization, with the potential to connect poor rural producers with global markets. Besides coffee, Fair Trade items include tea, cocoa, sugar, honey, bananas, fresh fruit and vegetables, dried fruit, fruit juices, rice, wine, nuts and oilseeds, cut flowers, ornamental plants, cotton, and a variety of handmade crafts - but coffee remains the core of the Fair Trade system.
My Answer
To support socially responsible farming methods, coffee drinkers need to buy Fair Trade beans which are priced a little higher than the market rate resulting to a slightly higher profit for small rural producers.

Tips:
1)Write 30-40 words
2) Identify 3 important ideas in the passage and include it in the sentence through using connectors such as yet, but, however, which, that, with, until, due to....
3) Use synonyms for the key ideas you identified in the passage so it may not sound copied
4) Just use simple but academic vocabularies

Hope this helps for the Writing

maggot0926

sa e2pronounce kelangan may bayad po?

AkawntantAnne

@maggot0926 Yes for paid members only

cutsiechick21

hello share ko lang po yung pte experience ko and hubby.. nagtest kami last Oct 23, Monday.. nagsstart kaming basahin ung tips, tutorial and score guide mga 3 weeks before exam tas yung pinakapractice namin ay 1 week before the scheduled date.. nung nagppractice na ko, natakot ako sa repeat sentence kase hindi ko maulit ng buo ung sentence.. pero okay lang aral pa din ako.. una naming inaral yung PTE academic 79 plus ebook kase andun ung step by step na gagawin per task.. at the same time, pinanuod din namin yung e2 language videos sa youtube.. tas ung pte plus na and yung offline test.. then a day before exam, ng mock test kami twice.. and ang pinaka helpful ay ung tips dito sa forum.. finallow ko ung suggestion ni @Heprex (thank you po sa tips).. okay naman yung score namin kase naachieve namin yung score na gusto namin.. yung result pala ay nakuha nmin after 24 hours..

ceasarkho

Supersaiyan said:

@ceasarkho, thanks sa feedback mo bro, big help sa aming nag struggle para maka superior sa writing yang comment mo. I see, nkita ko na difference, haha, mukang sa pag paraphrase ako nadale and lack of some supporting studies. So I must be wary na kpag nag paraphrase ako hndi kakabig sa ibang topic. Maraming salamat sa time sa pag construct ng isang part sa essay. GODbless.

Nga pala additionally bro, anong structure type mo sa essay. Ginagamit ko ksi saken yung kay E2Language. 3-4-4-2 Essay structure.

Correct. E2 language rin but except sa introduction gamit ko Steven with last sentence replaced with E2Language.
For 3-4-4-2 structure, depende bro if I have more related ideas ginagawa ko na 3-N-N-2.
One more thing, quick starter sa argument paragraphs, Sentence1: S+V+O > Sentence2: S(Sentence1 Object)+V+O > N... then add na evidence/samples > conclusion. Basta 1 idea for each argument paragraph. Mock test ulit ako sa Friday para maconfirm ko ulit if effective ang formula na ito. Thanks. God bless!

curiousmom

Hello @pangky_town oct 23 ako ng take.. essay ko “influence of mass media in shaping young generations opinion” =

Summarize written text
“ australia as democratic country forced to vote, other democratic countries no force to vote” prang ganun hehe

shuroro

@Supersaiyan regarding pala sa mock exam kapag nagexceed ka ng time, hindi na daw scored kapag na-reach mo yung time limit after submitting the answer.

superluckyclover

hello! Salamat sa lahat ng tips na nakuha ko dito, best formula from @Heprex na tried and tested na rin ng brother ko to get superior scores! Maraming salamat brother.

Exam ko this morning at habang fresh pa ang essay question ko ay----Do laws affect human behavior?

Nagkalat ako sa describe image pero tuloy tuloy lang ang pagsasalita gaya ng tips dito. Wag mag ahh, uhhh.

Praying for my superior results!

kzander22

How much po exact price ng pte acd ngaun? Thanks po

Supersaiyan

@ceasarkho, thanks sa insights bro. Sana makuha na nten to sa next take. Hehe. Madali lang sana tong essay kung walang mga procedures and structure, humirap nga mag compose kpag sumusunod sa structure at kapag limited idea sa essay topic. Need pag aralan yung mga sample essay answers.

@lottysatty, thanks po sa pag share ng idea sa SWT. Galing po ng way ng pagsagot nyo dito sana ma adapt ko dn yung ganitong skill. Need pa ng practice.

@shuroro, sabi na eh. Haha. May doubt dn tlga ako sa mock exams ko kung bket di ko ma reach 70+ sa Communicative Skills, isa sa iniisip ko yang timer at misleading sya ksi hndi sya same sa actual PTE exam. 1Hr 22Min sa mock for whole speaking and writing tasks pero sa actual may separate timer yang SWT at Essays.

kzander22

How much po exact pricd ng pte ngaun? Pls reply po slmat po

Supersaiyan

@kzander22, P9.2K po kpag sa aecc global po kayo bumili ng voucher. P10K+ po kapag sa mismong site po ni PTEVUE site.

Follow these steps:

1. Purchase voucher first at https://www.aeccglobal.com/ph/ptevoucher/
2. Create acct here: http://www.pearsonvue.com/pte/
3. Schedule your exam date and time and enter the voucher code given by aeccglobal

Location: only 1 place in PH in Trident Tower Makati

HTH!

kzander22

Salamat po ng madami! Godbless you po..

GoldSeeker

Hi guys!
I will be taking the exam by 15 December and I am aiming to get 79+ to get 20 points for my PR application. I have been reading through everyone's tips when it comes to preparing and it has been overwhelming. Now, I would just like to ask which review package would you recommend for me to purchase - PTE Silver? PTE Gold? E2Language Budget or Bronze?
Thank you!!

pangky_town

@superluckyclover, @curiousmom , @Blackmamba , @Supersaiyan - salamat mga kapatid sa pagshare nyo sa mga essay nyo. Yong essay ko naman sa first take ko ay 2 (yes pot 2 essays) hahahahah saklap, at ito po yon:

1. What is the most important invention in the last 100 years, it is the computers, airplane or antibiotics?
2. Teachers will be replaced by computers, what is your opinion?

Sana mag share naman ang iba ng mga essay topic nila kasi for a month pa balik balik lang yong mga essay questions in a random way. At least meron tayon idea in advance and we can prepare for the idea to write during the exam.

xylocke

I find this website helpful.

http://pteacademicexam.com/pte-academic-essay-writing-questions-and-topics-with-answers-latest-essay-list/

Blackmamba

@pangky_town Pinost ko po yung website ba collection of PTE exams. Sa dalawang take ko, andun lahat ung essay na natanong sakin.

Heprex

@superluckyclover hehe glad i can help po. Congrats sa brother mo, and all the best sa result mo.

GoldSeeker

@Master_Siomaw Hi tanong ko lang. Did you purchase a package from E2 language? I have also downloaded the review materials here in the forum. Im a bit overwhelmed with all the information. So ano po suggest niyo na pagrereview considering that I will be taking mine on 15 December?

Salamat

kh@L3L

@GoldSeeker i bought a pack from e2 before pra mka pag practice at to have an idea on the exam...so far mejo helpful cya at 1 year ang validity ng mga practice materials.

ikaden0802

@zena_mhae may result na b exam mo? I encountered the same problem yesterday sa RELC ako nagtake during speaking part. naka 10 questions na ata ko. After magrestart ok nman, bumalik doon sa question kung saan tumigil and d nman ako nagahol sa oras. Nagemail dw sila to convey the issue the Pearson kasi ang worry ko baka affected speaking test ko. And tama ka, nakakawala sa focus...imagine I still have the last part of speaking, writing, reading and listening