Statement of Purpose - para sa IT na mag master course...Pano ba?

Amie2018here

Trying to help cousin sa Pinas at rejected sya parati. May pamilya, baby pa anak nya, nagaapply ng master ng IT kase tagal na sya IT but mag 40 na sya. May tips ba kayo to help him? galling naman nya magsulat...but wala paren. Salamat sa mga advise....

athelene

@Amie2018here hi, sa visa application ba sya nareject or sa school application? Baka po hindi nya masyado ma-explain nang malinaw yung career goal nya and value ng master's degree for him. ano po ba yung feedback sa kanya regarding sa application nya?

Amie2018here

hi @athelene na school appln na reject ....una kase kaka turn 40 nya. eh may kaibigan sya 41 yrs old nagaaply nauna lang ng 1 yr sa kanya. tapos yung isa di sinabi. baka ren sinama kase misis at baby nya....dapat b sya muna? pag 40 ba reject agad sila ngayon?

athelene

@Amie2018here no I don't think the age should matter, nor yung inclusion ng wife and child sa application. Baka may kulang lng sa isinulat nya kaya nareject o may hindi naipaliwanag nga ng maayos. Sa aling school po ba sya nag-apply?

May sample outline po ako na ginawa sa kabilang thread regarding GTE (similar to SOP), baka makatulong sa inyo:

http://pinoyau.info/discussion/comment/289072/#Comment_289072

Amie2018here

salamat @athelene .....mag try sya ngayon sa WSU baka sakali daw...thanks for the thread. I will show to him....

athelene

@Amie2018here you're welcome good luck sa pinsan mo, sana matanggap yung SOP nya sa WSU

Amie2018here

Thx so much @athelene

Amie2018here

hi @athelene my cousin mentioned pala baka daw the reason of his student visa refusal kase ba he applied for Skilled PR as IT but was refused more than a year ago (short sya ng 5 points) ....would that affect his chances to get student visa kaya? do they see ba sa university or immigration if he applied and rejected for PR kaya? salamat sa advise ha....

athelene

@Amie2018here I don't think universities have access to immigration information aside from VEVO (if visa was granted); only DIBP (immigration) can see his prior visa applications.

Since school yung nagreject ng application nya, focus muna kayo na ma-approve yung school application before worrying about DIBP. As long as complete and legit naman yung application nya for a student visa, there's no reason for DIBP to reject his student visa application.

If your cousin doesn't mind, can I read through his SOP? Para may idea ako kung ano yung ipinasa nya sa school. Or may iba pa bang feedback yung school regarding his application aside from the SOP?

mixme

one reason na sinabi sakin ng agent ko is wag ko imemention na plan ko mag stay sa australia, sabihin ko lang daw for qualification ung studies, another thing check nyo po kung qualified sa masters like me may bachelors na ako sa ph kaso di ako qualified kumuha ng masters sa AUS kaya take daw muna ako 2 year bach, pero namention nyo po matagal na sya sa IT industry so d ko lang po sure, anyway sana nakatulong hehe