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Posts: 63Member
Joined: Aug 24, 2013
17-08-2013 IELTS Acad Take 1 @ BC Dubai L-7.5 R-7 W-6.5 S-7
14-09-2013 Applied for writing remark
26-10-2013 ELTS Acad Take 2 @ BC Dubai L-6.0 R-6.0 W-7 S-6.5
09-11-2013 Received writing remark but score unchanged
14-12-2013 IELTS Acad Take 3 @ UOWD Dubai - L-7 R-7 W-6.5 S-6.5
20-01-2014 Preparing again for Take 4...Lord bless our struggle to achieve our target band score...
Posts: 49Member
Joined: May 24, 2013
Nominated Occupation: 261311 (Analyst Programmer)-
May 16, 2013: ACS Skills Assessment Submitted
Jun 08, 2013: IELTS @ BC SG - L/R: 7.5, W/S: 6.5 [ ]
Jun 28, 2013: IELTS EOR - Applied Re-marking for W/S
Aug 12, 2013: ACS Result - Suitable, AQF Bachelor + 8 yrs exp [ ]
Sep 02, 2013: IELTS EOR - Success: L/R: 7.5, W: 7.0, S: 8.0 [ ]
Sep 12, 2013: EOI Submitted for Visa 189 (65 points)
Oct 07, 2013: Invited for Visa 189 [ ]
Oct 30, 2013: Lodged Visa 189
Nov 20, 2013: CO Allocated - GSM Brisbane Team 33 [ ]
Nov 29, 2013: SG COC Applied
Dec 16, 2013: Took Medical Exam
Dec 20, 2013: SG COC Collected and Uploaded
Dec 23, 2013: Visa granted! (IED: Dec 20, 2014)
Lord, maraming salamat po sa pagpapala
Posts: 1,085Member, De-activated
Joined: Jan 24, 2013
2013-Jan : Decided to pursue my OZ dream
2013-Nov : 1st Ielts-GT @ BC Manila: L-8;R-6.5;W-7.5;S-7.5
2014-Mar : 2nd Ielts-GT @ BC Manila: L-8;R-8.5;W-6.5;S-7.5
Pahinga muna. Sakit sa puso at bulsa!
2015-May : 1st PTE-A @ Bright Center: L-85;R-70;S-45;W-90
2015-May : 2nd PTE-A @Bright Center; L-90;R-70;S-47; W-90
2015-July : 3rd PTE-A @Pearson: L-90;R-77;S-83; W-90
2015-July 20 - Lodged docs to Vetassess
2015-Oct 1: VET Positive outcome
2015-Oct 1: Submitted EOI 190 visa to NSW (55+5)
2015-Oct 4: Submitted EOI 190 visa to QLD (55+5)
2015-Oct 5: QLD responded, rejected 190 due to change in occupation list but offered ITA for 489 visa instead
2015-Nov 2: DIBP points adjusted to 60+5 (due to additional 1 year working experience)
2015-Nov 26: ITA for SS NSW
2015-Nov 28: Submitted SS application
2015-Dec 17: SS Approved + Received 190 ITA
2015-Dec 23: Lodged 190
2016-Jan 5: Medical @ Nationwide (Php5,600 na ang fee!!)
2016-Jan 8: Medical Clearance Provided - no action required (Thank you Lord!)
2016-Jan 18: Applied for Driving SP and Direct Visa Grant!!! (Thank You Lord!)
2016-Jan 26: PDOS @ CFO Manila + Enrolled at A1 Driving
2016-Mar 14: BIG MOVE!:)
PRAY HARD, WORK HARDER!
Compilation of tips/resources/stories for PTE Academic Preparation: pteacademicreview.wordpress.com
Template or "cheat sheet" as called by many: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B1OZBrQj0i5LWU1EYVZTaDF4VzA/view?usp=sharing
sana po makatulong.. God bless!
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Just an idea for you, hope it works.
09-07-14 - Visa Grant! Thank you so much, Lord! IED 03-03-15
15-09-14 - Landed in Radelaide! South Australia
29-09-14 - Started working in Adelaide South Australia
28-09-15 - Left the first job
06-10-15 - Started the second job
18-09-16 - Moved to Sydney
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...At sa wakas naging sisiw na nga ang itlog!
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Posts: 306Member
Joined: Aug 24, 2013
2013 - 1st IELTS L 7.5 R 7.5 W 5.5 S 7.5
April 2014 - 2nd IELTS L 7.5 R 7.0 W 6.0 S 7.0
14 May 2014 - CDR sent via DHL Singapore
16 May 2014 - Delivered at EA
19 May 2014 - 870 AUD charged to my credit card. Waiting game starts now
7 August 2014 - EOR for my IELTS L 7.5 R 7 W 7 S 6
26 August 2014 - EA Positive results Civil Engineer
11 October 2014 EOR Speaking 6 to 6.5
28 Feb IELTS success! 10 pts! L 7.5 R 8 W 7 S 7.5
13 March 2015 EOI submitted visa 189 65 pts.
27 March Invited
27 March Lodged! At long last. In His perfect timing. Scan documents and obtain clearances and medical
11 May VISA GRANT! Direct grant. Did not upload form 80
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Joined: Sep 08, 2013
Posts: 1,084Member
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Goodluck malapit lapit na pala exam mo.
Electrical engineer po ako chief.
09-07-14 - Visa Grant! Thank you so much, Lord! IED 03-03-15
15-09-14 - Landed in Radelaide! South Australia
29-09-14 - Started working in Adelaide South Australia
28-09-15 - Left the first job
06-10-15 - Started the second job
18-09-16 - Moved to Sydney
"The key to everything is patience. You get the chicken by hatching the egg, not by smashing it." Arnold H. Glasow
...At sa wakas naging sisiw na nga ang itlog!
Visa lodged members please share your timelines here:
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/18d1OUvt_9wyGxVrUu-12aoo8evhMKwGFHrf2smAaoU4/edit#gid=424981924
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Posts: 181Member
Joined: Aug 27, 2013
Oct 25, 2013: IELTS GT Exam results - Competent
April 30, 2014: EA Skills Letter received - IE 233511
Oct 22, 2014: NSW confirmed my application was received in
their system. SRN 1858 & 1867.
Jan 12, 2015: Received NSW SS approval. Thank you Lord!
Jan 12, 2015: Received Invitation to lodge Visa Subclass 190
from DIBP. Thank you Lord!
Jan 16, 2015: Lodged Visa Subclass 190 application (Family of 4)
Visa fee charged to my credit card.
Feb 20, 2015: CO allocated (Adelaide GSM Team5),
requested for Form 80.
Mar 03, 2015: Visa Grant. Thank you Lord!!!
Aug 28, 2015: Last working day as Senior SQE.
Sept 27,2015: Big Move to NSW Australia.
Jan 11, 2016: Started working as SQE in ResMed.
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Joined: Feb 14, 2013
09-07-14 - Visa Grant! Thank you so much, Lord! IED 03-03-15
15-09-14 - Landed in Radelaide! South Australia
29-09-14 - Started working in Adelaide South Australia
28-09-15 - Left the first job
06-10-15 - Started the second job
18-09-16 - Moved to Sydney
"The key to everything is patience. You get the chicken by hatching the egg, not by smashing it." Arnold H. Glasow
...At sa wakas naging sisiw na nga ang itlog!
Visa lodged members please share your timelines here:
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/18d1OUvt_9wyGxVrUu-12aoo8evhMKwGFHrf2smAaoU4/edit#gid=424981924
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Posts: 181Member
Joined: Aug 27, 2013
Oct 25, 2013: IELTS GT Exam results - Competent
April 30, 2014: EA Skills Letter received - IE 233511
Oct 22, 2014: NSW confirmed my application was received in
their system. SRN 1858 & 1867.
Jan 12, 2015: Received NSW SS approval. Thank you Lord!
Jan 12, 2015: Received Invitation to lodge Visa Subclass 190
from DIBP. Thank you Lord!
Jan 16, 2015: Lodged Visa Subclass 190 application (Family of 4)
Visa fee charged to my credit card.
Feb 20, 2015: CO allocated (Adelaide GSM Team5),
requested for Form 80.
Mar 03, 2015: Visa Grant. Thank you Lord!!!
Aug 28, 2015: Last working day as Senior SQE.
Sept 27,2015: Big Move to NSW Australia.
Jan 11, 2016: Started working as SQE in ResMed.
Posts: 1,084Member
Joined: Feb 14, 2013
09-07-14 - Visa Grant! Thank you so much, Lord! IED 03-03-15
15-09-14 - Landed in Radelaide! South Australia
29-09-14 - Started working in Adelaide South Australia
28-09-15 - Left the first job
06-10-15 - Started the second job
18-09-16 - Moved to Sydney
"The key to everything is patience. You get the chicken by hatching the egg, not by smashing it." Arnold H. Glasow
...At sa wakas naging sisiw na nga ang itlog!
Visa lodged members please share your timelines here:
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/18d1OUvt_9wyGxVrUu-12aoo8evhMKwGFHrf2smAaoU4/edit#gid=424981924
https://www.facebook.com/groups/1490118541216428/
Posts: 306Member
Joined: Aug 24, 2013
2013 - 1st IELTS L 7.5 R 7.5 W 5.5 S 7.5
April 2014 - 2nd IELTS L 7.5 R 7.0 W 6.0 S 7.0
14 May 2014 - CDR sent via DHL Singapore
16 May 2014 - Delivered at EA
19 May 2014 - 870 AUD charged to my credit card. Waiting game starts now
7 August 2014 - EOR for my IELTS L 7.5 R 7 W 7 S 6
26 August 2014 - EA Positive results Civil Engineer
11 October 2014 EOR Speaking 6 to 6.5
28 Feb IELTS success! 10 pts! L 7.5 R 8 W 7 S 7.5
13 March 2015 EOI submitted visa 189 65 pts.
27 March Invited
27 March Lodged! At long last. In His perfect timing. Scan documents and obtain clearances and medical
11 May VISA GRANT! Direct grant. Did not upload form 80
Posts: 306Member
Joined: Aug 24, 2013
2013 - 1st IELTS L 7.5 R 7.5 W 5.5 S 7.5
April 2014 - 2nd IELTS L 7.5 R 7.0 W 6.0 S 7.0
14 May 2014 - CDR sent via DHL Singapore
16 May 2014 - Delivered at EA
19 May 2014 - 870 AUD charged to my credit card. Waiting game starts now
7 August 2014 - EOR for my IELTS L 7.5 R 7 W 7 S 6
26 August 2014 - EA Positive results Civil Engineer
11 October 2014 EOR Speaking 6 to 6.5
28 Feb IELTS success! 10 pts! L 7.5 R 8 W 7 S 7.5
13 March 2015 EOI submitted visa 189 65 pts.
27 March Invited
27 March Lodged! At long last. In His perfect timing. Scan documents and obtain clearances and medical
11 May VISA GRANT! Direct grant. Did not upload form 80
Posts: 1,084Member
Joined: Feb 14, 2013
09-07-14 - Visa Grant! Thank you so much, Lord! IED 03-03-15
15-09-14 - Landed in Radelaide! South Australia
29-09-14 - Started working in Adelaide South Australia
28-09-15 - Left the first job
06-10-15 - Started the second job
18-09-16 - Moved to Sydney
"The key to everything is patience. You get the chicken by hatching the egg, not by smashing it." Arnold H. Glasow
...At sa wakas naging sisiw na nga ang itlog!
Visa lodged members please share your timelines here:
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/18d1OUvt_9wyGxVrUu-12aoo8evhMKwGFHrf2smAaoU4/edit#gid=424981924
https://www.facebook.com/groups/1490118541216428/
Posts: 1,085Member, De-activated
Joined: Jan 24, 2013
thanks!
2013-Jan : Decided to pursue my OZ dream
2013-Nov : 1st Ielts-GT @ BC Manila: L-8;R-6.5;W-7.5;S-7.5
2014-Mar : 2nd Ielts-GT @ BC Manila: L-8;R-8.5;W-6.5;S-7.5
Pahinga muna. Sakit sa puso at bulsa!
2015-May : 1st PTE-A @ Bright Center: L-85;R-70;S-45;W-90
2015-May : 2nd PTE-A @Bright Center; L-90;R-70;S-47; W-90
2015-July : 3rd PTE-A @Pearson: L-90;R-77;S-83; W-90
2015-July 20 - Lodged docs to Vetassess
2015-Oct 1: VET Positive outcome
2015-Oct 1: Submitted EOI 190 visa to NSW (55+5)
2015-Oct 4: Submitted EOI 190 visa to QLD (55+5)
2015-Oct 5: QLD responded, rejected 190 due to change in occupation list but offered ITA for 489 visa instead
2015-Nov 2: DIBP points adjusted to 60+5 (due to additional 1 year working experience)
2015-Nov 26: ITA for SS NSW
2015-Nov 28: Submitted SS application
2015-Dec 17: SS Approved + Received 190 ITA
2015-Dec 23: Lodged 190
2016-Jan 5: Medical @ Nationwide (Php5,600 na ang fee!!)
2016-Jan 8: Medical Clearance Provided - no action required (Thank you Lord!)
2016-Jan 18: Applied for Driving SP and Direct Visa Grant!!! (Thank You Lord!)
2016-Jan 26: PDOS @ CFO Manila + Enrolled at A1 Driving
2016-Mar 14: BIG MOVE!:)
PRAY HARD, WORK HARDER!
Compilation of tips/resources/stories for PTE Academic Preparation: pteacademicreview.wordpress.com
Template or "cheat sheet" as called by many: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B1OZBrQj0i5LWU1EYVZTaDF4VzA/view?usp=sharing
sana po makatulong.. God bless!
Posts: 1,085Member, De-activated
Joined: Jan 24, 2013
2013-Jan : Decided to pursue my OZ dream
2013-Nov : 1st Ielts-GT @ BC Manila: L-8;R-6.5;W-7.5;S-7.5
2014-Mar : 2nd Ielts-GT @ BC Manila: L-8;R-8.5;W-6.5;S-7.5
Pahinga muna. Sakit sa puso at bulsa!
2015-May : 1st PTE-A @ Bright Center: L-85;R-70;S-45;W-90
2015-May : 2nd PTE-A @Bright Center; L-90;R-70;S-47; W-90
2015-July : 3rd PTE-A @Pearson: L-90;R-77;S-83; W-90
2015-July 20 - Lodged docs to Vetassess
2015-Oct 1: VET Positive outcome
2015-Oct 1: Submitted EOI 190 visa to NSW (55+5)
2015-Oct 4: Submitted EOI 190 visa to QLD (55+5)
2015-Oct 5: QLD responded, rejected 190 due to change in occupation list but offered ITA for 489 visa instead
2015-Nov 2: DIBP points adjusted to 60+5 (due to additional 1 year working experience)
2015-Nov 26: ITA for SS NSW
2015-Nov 28: Submitted SS application
2015-Dec 17: SS Approved + Received 190 ITA
2015-Dec 23: Lodged 190
2016-Jan 5: Medical @ Nationwide (Php5,600 na ang fee!!)
2016-Jan 8: Medical Clearance Provided - no action required (Thank you Lord!)
2016-Jan 18: Applied for Driving SP and Direct Visa Grant!!! (Thank You Lord!)
2016-Jan 26: PDOS @ CFO Manila + Enrolled at A1 Driving
2016-Mar 14: BIG MOVE!:)
PRAY HARD, WORK HARDER!
Compilation of tips/resources/stories for PTE Academic Preparation: pteacademicreview.wordpress.com
Template or "cheat sheet" as called by many: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B1OZBrQj0i5LWU1EYVZTaDF4VzA/view?usp=sharing
sana po makatulong.. God bless!
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Joined: Sep 19, 2013
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TOPIC: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life.
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MY ESSAY:
We must acknowledge the fact that education is the key to success. It became more true in today’s world environment. No one can deny that having a skill of difference careers will boost up our level in the competitive world. However, others might view this as less important. This essay would discuss the importance of having a further study and why others see this as invaluable.
Man people build up their corporate dreams right after they finish their course degree. Also, others intend to focus their mindset on one field only and enrich theirselves in that particular profession. There are factors as to why pursuing another career is not really vital. First, the cost of having another formal qualifications is expensive. It is to be bear in mind that there is a need to invest a certain amount of money to be able to obtain the certification that we intend to get. Secondly, there are some people who have already set out their priorities in life. For instance, some professionals would rather spend more of their time travelling, looking after their family or working in their current job. Another point is that holding another qualification is not a guarantee of having a successful life. In fact, there are brilliant people who never completed college, such as Bill Gates and Mark Zuckerberg.
However, pursuing another career is highly essential to have an edge in the job market. This will also open the door to more opportunities. One reason is the demands for highly skilled and competent individuals are increasing. There are many companies who prefer employing applicants which has a proven knowledge through formal certification of a certain skill. In addition, for some reason, there are certain individuals who never get satisfied learning just one skill. They tend to seek new learnings to give them the feeling of self-fulfilment. Lastly, this could help people earn a lot of extra money as they could perform work of different technical field.
In conclusion, importance of having a further education depends on how a person views it or on what are their priorities in life. In my own opinion, to have another qualification of other careers will help us enhance our personal competency.
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Joined: Jul 10, 2012
what's the use of auto draft-save? *gasp*
i'll try again tomorrow.
My Timeline
June 30, 2012- Took IDP IELTS Exam in Clark, Pampanga
July 12, 2012- IELTS Results (L-9, R-7, W-8.5, S-7.5, OB:8.0)
August 16, 2012- Submitted document for Engineers Australia Skills Assessment (Telecommunications Engineer)
Dec. 18, 2012- Officially received positive assessment result from EA. Work experience count was wrong, made an appeal to EA.
Jan. 4, 2013- Submitted EOI
Jan. 7, 2013- received invitation to apply for Subclass 189 Skilled Migrant Permanent Visa
Feb 21, 2013- Received correct Assessment Outcome from EA
March 1, 2013- Received confirmation from DIAC re Visa Application
April 8, 2013- CO Allocated (Team 6- Adelaide)
April 12, 2013- Medical Exam
April 28, 2013- Submitted NBI Clearance
June 27, 2013- Submitted Saudi PCC
July 2, 2013- VISA GRANTED!
Posts: 235Member
Joined: Mar 16, 2013
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Topic: Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, however believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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Family is the smallest unit of a community, children is a gift from God that has the right to live in a peaceful and loving society, wherein they should feel of having a significant place as an individual.
We must acknowledge the fact that parents are the first teacher of their children. No one can deny that parents should act as a role model to their child, they need to show good deeds and influence them with good morals and positive attitudes throughout their growing years. It is in the hands of the guardian the most important part of character building to their offspring.
However some tend to think that school has a big influence to the well being of the children.
Aside from the academic curriculum that they are offering, we can never deny that school has a big part in building the characters of our children.
Moreover both parents and school should work hand in hand for nurturing of every child.
Learning should be in a holistic approach that touches every aspect of knowledge not just academically but character such as: courage, resilience, faith, love and respect must be instilled as well to the children of our future, in able to be a good citizen of a society he lives in.
Ultimately we need to consider that we have our own ways and opinions in raising a child. I believe that both parents and school has an essential and significant role in our children's lives They should work together in leading the path and brings out the best of each and every child to be a good members of the society in the near future.
251513-Retail Pharmacist
May 21, 2013- Applied for Skills Assessment under APharmC
July 6, 2013- APharmC asked for additional references
Sept.4, 2013- Positive Assessment received
Oct. 26, 2013- Schedule of IELTS (Academic module)
Nov. 8, 2013 -IELTS Results L,R,W,S- 7.0 OBS-7.0 ( need to retake, I need to get 7.5 OBS with no lower than band 7 in any
sub-tests.)
May 10, 2014 (IELTS 2nd try) L,R,W-7,S-7.5 OBS-7 (failed again)
"Faith is not believing that God can, it's knowing that He will"
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Joined: Sep 19, 2013
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Joined: Sep 03, 2013
I'm supposed to get my results today but it says on the website that there are no records found when I entered my examiner number and id number.
Sept 7 takers, did you have the same experience? Nakalagay kasi pala dun, "Please note that this service is only available through selected managed British Council test centres." Could it be because I took it in Tagaytay and not in Manila?
Thanks!:-)
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Joined: Feb 14, 2013
sabit ako sa writing =(( 6.5
09-07-14 - Visa Grant! Thank you so much, Lord! IED 03-03-15
15-09-14 - Landed in Radelaide! South Australia
29-09-14 - Started working in Adelaide South Australia
28-09-15 - Left the first job
06-10-15 - Started the second job
18-09-16 - Moved to Sydney
"The key to everything is patience. You get the chicken by hatching the egg, not by smashing it." Arnold H. Glasow
...At sa wakas naging sisiw na nga ang itlog!
Visa lodged members please share your timelines here:
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/18d1OUvt_9wyGxVrUu-12aoo8evhMKwGFHrf2smAaoU4/edit#gid=424981924
https://www.facebook.com/groups/1490118541216428/
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Joined: Oct 03, 2012
Posts: 306Member
Joined: Aug 24, 2013
2013 - 1st IELTS L 7.5 R 7.5 W 5.5 S 7.5
April 2014 - 2nd IELTS L 7.5 R 7.0 W 6.0 S 7.0
14 May 2014 - CDR sent via DHL Singapore
16 May 2014 - Delivered at EA
19 May 2014 - 870 AUD charged to my credit card. Waiting game starts now
7 August 2014 - EOR for my IELTS L 7.5 R 7 W 7 S 6
26 August 2014 - EA Positive results Civil Engineer
11 October 2014 EOR Speaking 6 to 6.5
28 Feb IELTS success! 10 pts! L 7.5 R 8 W 7 S 7.5
13 March 2015 EOI submitted visa 189 65 pts.
27 March Invited
27 March Lodged! At long last. In His perfect timing. Scan documents and obtain clearances and medical
11 May VISA GRANT! Direct grant. Did not upload form 80
Posts: 306Member
Joined: Aug 24, 2013
2013 - 1st IELTS L 7.5 R 7.5 W 5.5 S 7.5
April 2014 - 2nd IELTS L 7.5 R 7.0 W 6.0 S 7.0
14 May 2014 - CDR sent via DHL Singapore
16 May 2014 - Delivered at EA
19 May 2014 - 870 AUD charged to my credit card. Waiting game starts now
7 August 2014 - EOR for my IELTS L 7.5 R 7 W 7 S 6
26 August 2014 - EA Positive results Civil Engineer
11 October 2014 EOR Speaking 6 to 6.5
28 Feb IELTS success! 10 pts! L 7.5 R 8 W 7 S 7.5
13 March 2015 EOI submitted visa 189 65 pts.
27 March Invited
27 March Lodged! At long last. In His perfect timing. Scan documents and obtain clearances and medical
11 May VISA GRANT! Direct grant. Did not upload form 80
Posts: 1,084Member
Joined: Feb 14, 2013
Yes, chief re-mark at take ulit ng exam sa IDP sa 12 Oct (lagot na ako ke misis sa gastos na to)
09-07-14 - Visa Grant! Thank you so much, Lord! IED 03-03-15
15-09-14 - Landed in Radelaide! South Australia
29-09-14 - Started working in Adelaide South Australia
28-09-15 - Left the first job
06-10-15 - Started the second job
18-09-16 - Moved to Sydney
"The key to everything is patience. You get the chicken by hatching the egg, not by smashing it." Arnold H. Glasow
...At sa wakas naging sisiw na nga ang itlog!
Visa lodged members please share your timelines here:
https://docs.google.com/spreadsheets/d/18d1OUvt_9wyGxVrUu-12aoo8evhMKwGFHrf2smAaoU4/edit#gid=424981924
https://www.facebook.com/groups/1490118541216428/
Posts: 91Member
Joined: Jul 10, 2012
let's go first to the topic,
"TOPIC: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion mil be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life."
Looks like there's something missing on the topic. Usually, there are succeeding questions such as:
What are the advantages and disadvantages of each?
Do you agree or disagree?
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons to your answer and include relevant examples.
Why is this? Is this a positive or negative trend?
Discuss both points of view and give your own point of view.
So I assume that the question to your topic is: What are the advantages and disadvantages of having a single or multiple careers.
Now, let's take a look at your introduction:
"We must acknowledge the fact that education is the key to success. It became more true in today’s world environment. No one can deny that having a skill of difference careers will boost up our level in the competitive world. However, others might view this as less important. This essay would discuss the importance of having a further study and why others see this as invaluable."
first, it would be much better if you used the third person narrative mode as it will give you a higher band score. In your first sentence you used the pronoun "WE" which is in second person plural narrative mode, you can change this to third person by using "People must acknowledge..." or "Everyone must....."
Second, it is much better if you go directly with the topic without preceding sentences. You can start with a paraphrase of the topic plus your opinion. In your intro, you started with two sentences before you went on to the topic, you can save these two sentences in your next paragraphs instead of putting them in the introduction:
Here are some examples of introduction from essayforum.com:
Most people's aim in their life is to have a good career in order to financially support themselves and their families. However, there has been a difference in people's thought about choosing a career. Some think having a single career is out of date and being multi-careered should be considered. Others hold the oppsite opinion.
This introduction is more concise and direct to the point:
Many people keep an idea of having a single career as a means of living through their lives. However, there appears a new trend of having several careers at the same time, followed by further education as an indispensable part of life.
My introduction would be like this:
In today's contemporary society, It is not uncommon to see people who venture in several fields and seek further education in pursuit of a more stable financial status. However, there are also some arguments that highlight the advantages of having a single expertise.
Going to your first argument, you said:
"Man people build up their corporate dreams right after they finish their course degree. Also, others intend to focus their mindset on one field only and enrich theirselves in that particular profession. There are factors as to why pursuing another career is not really vital. First, the cost of having another formal qualifications is expensive. It is to be bear in mind that there is a need to invest a certain amount of money to be able to obtain the certification that we intend to get. Secondly, there are some people who have already set out their priorities in life. For instance, some professionals would rather spend more of their time travelling, looking after their family or working in their current job. Another point is that holding another qualification is not a guarantee of having a successful life. In fact, there are brilliant people who never completed college, such as Bill Gates and Mark Zuckerberg."
Your points are clear and strong but there seems to be some grammatical and spelling errors. you can minimize them by reviewing your essay once you finished it. Here are my corrections:
ManMany peoplebuildbuilt up their corporate dreams right after theyfinishfinished their course degree. Also, othersintendintended to focus their mindsetin only one fieldand enrichtheirselvesthemselves in that particular profession. There are factors as to why pursuing another career is not really vital. First, the cost of having another formalqualificationsqualification is expensive. It is to be bear in mind (not sure about this, should it be "it is to be borne in mind"? but it seems awkward, i would use it "is to be taken into account" rather) that there is a need to invest a certain amount of money to be able to obtain the certification thatwepeople (or they) intend to get. Secondly, there are some people who have already set out their priorities in life. For instance, some professionals would rather spend more of their time travelling, looking after their family or working in their current job. Another point is that holding another qualification is not a guarantee of having a successful life. In fact, there are brilliant people who never completed college education, such as Bill Gates and Mark Zuckerberg.Also take note of your narrative mode, avoid shifting from third person to second person.
Now, let's take a look on your next paragraph:
However, pursuing another career is highly essential to have an edge in the job market. This will also open the door to more opportunities. One reason is the demands for highly skilled and competent individuals are increasing. There are many companies who prefer employing applicants which has a proven knowledge through formal certification of a certain skill. In addition, for some reason, there are certain individuals who never get satisfied learning just one skill. They tend to seek new learnings to give them the feeling of self-fulfilment. Lastly, this could help people earn a lot of extra money as they could perform work of different technical field.
Again, take note of your grammar and spellings. here are my corrections:
However, pursuing another career is highly essential to have an edge in the job market. This will also open the door to more opportunities. One reason is the increasing
demandsdemand for highly-skilled and competent individualsare increasin. There are many companies who prefer employing applicants whichhas ahave proven knowledge through formalcertificationcertifications of a certain skill. In addition, for some reason, there are certain individuals who never get satisfied learning just one skill. They tend to seek new learnings to give them the feeling ofself-fulfilmentself-fulfillment. Lastly, this could help people earn a lot of extra money as they could perform work of different technical field.My Timeline
June 30, 2012- Took IDP IELTS Exam in Clark, Pampanga
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Dec. 18, 2012- Officially received positive assessment result from EA. Work experience count was wrong, made an appeal to EA.
Jan. 4, 2013- Submitted EOI
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March 1, 2013- Received confirmation from DIAC re Visa Application
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and finally, let go to your Conclusion:
In conclusion, importance of having a further education depends on how a person views it or on what are their priorities in life. In my own opinion, to have another qualification of other careers will help us enhance our personal competency.
please be consistent on your pronouns. it should be "...depends on how a person views it or on
what are theirhis priorities in life". or "...depends on howa personpeopleviewsview it or onwhat aretheir priorities in life".Corrections:
In conclusion, the importance of having
afurther education depends on how a person views it or onwhat are theirhis priorities in life. In my own opinion, to have another qualification of other careers will help us enhance our personal competency.Without changing the sense of the above conclusion, my version would look like this
Taking everything into account, the importance of having further education depends on how a person views it or on his priorities in life. However, there are stronger arguments that supports the idea of having another qualifications as it will will greatly enhance one's personal competency.
TIPS: try to lessen word repetitions by using various vocabs. you can use the word field, specialty, employment, profession instead of the word career. or you can use the word specialty or expertise instead of the word skill.
THERE YOU GO! overall, you did a good job albeit some grammatical errors. You have the ideas, you just need to polish your essay. Keep practicing and good luck!
Guys, correct me if I have missed or bombed something. I'm no English expert, not even close.
My Timeline
June 30, 2012- Took IDP IELTS Exam in Clark, Pampanga
July 12, 2012- IELTS Results (L-9, R-7, W-8.5, S-7.5, OB:8.0)
August 16, 2012- Submitted document for Engineers Australia Skills Assessment (Telecommunications Engineer)
Dec. 18, 2012- Officially received positive assessment result from EA. Work experience count was wrong, made an appeal to EA.
Jan. 4, 2013- Submitted EOI
Jan. 7, 2013- received invitation to apply for Subclass 189 Skilled Migrant Permanent Visa
Feb 21, 2013- Received correct Assessment Outcome from EA
March 1, 2013- Received confirmation from DIAC re Visa Application
April 8, 2013- CO Allocated (Team 6- Adelaide)
April 12, 2013- Medical Exam
April 28, 2013- Submitted NBI Clearance
June 27, 2013- Submitted Saudi PCC
July 2, 2013- VISA GRANTED!
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