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  • btarroja213btarroja213 Singapore
    Posts: 357Member
    Joined: Jun 04, 2013
    Scores have been released today (at least for those who took with British Council last Aug 17). The wait was nerve-wracking. But thankfully, I got pretty decent scores. One hurdle done. Next is waiting for the ACS Skills Assessment results.

    Good luck to everyone!
    What do you mean "Pretty Decent Scores"? Your scores are freaking AWESOME!!!! Congrats!!! :-D

    ANZSCO 233513
    Mar 2013 - IELTS Results - Pass but no points.
    04 June 2013 - EA Recieved CDR application.
    13 Aug 2013 - Got results from EA from the mailbox :-D
    04 Oct 2013 - Ielts results = Pass with +10 points.
    04 Oct 2013 - Lodged Subclass 189 with 65 Points
    07 Oct 2013 - Invited for Visa 189 :-D
    13 Nov 2013 - FBI Clearance delivered to USA Address
    24 Nov 2013 - Lodged Subclass 189. Waiting for CO.
    17 Dec 2013 - CO assigned. Team 34 Brisbane
    23 Jan 2014 - Medicals Cleared
    24 Jan 2014 - NBI clearance uploaded.
    30 Jan 2014 - VISA GRANT. EID: 04 Nov 2014
    27 Sept 2014 - Initial Entry - Brisbane
    30 Sept 2014 - Open DL R/C

  • mhejmhej Sydney
    Posts: 202Member
    Joined: May 29, 2013
    edited August 2013
    @btarroja213 - hehe. thanks! I was really nervous all throughout. Nahirapan kasi ako sa mga practice tests na pinrovide nung migration agency ko. But luckily, the exam itself was not that hard. :). First hurdle palang naman yan. It wouldn't mean anything kung hindi ako papasa sa Skills Assessment. So that's what's making me nervous right now.

    Anyway, since this is a tips discussion, here are some of my tips for the IELTs General takers out there:

    1. Listening

    - Same as what everyone is saying here. You really need to practice this one. It would be best if you can download audios that are actually being used for an IELTs Listening test. It will help you get an idea of how the test is run and will give you time to strategize on what is the most effective technique for you during test date.

    - Personally, underlining keywords helped a lot. They will give you time to read the questions before they play the audio. Take advantage of that.

    - If you miss a question while the audio is playing, DO NOT PANIC. Keep your focus and move on to the next question. Dwelling on that missed question will compromise your attention and will effectively make you lose the succeeding questions. They only play the audio once. So there is no turning back.

    - Clean your ears before taking the exam. :)


    2. Reading

    - Forward read the questions before reading the actual article. Like what is said here, it doesn't matter if it doesn't make sense. At least you will already have an idea of what to look for when reading the articles.

    - Nothing is verbatim. Everything is paraphrased. Or at least, keep that in mind. The reading exam tests your comprehension skills, not your word search/word matching abilities.

    - Once you have an answer, put them directly on your answer sheet. There will be no time to transfer your answers from questionnaire to answer sheet (unlike in the listening test). Believe me, the reading test will take 1 hour just to go through it once.

    3. Writing

    - You will need to write 2 essays. Most likely, the first one will be a letter. The last one would be some sort of editorial where you will have to express your opinion on a certain subject and justify it with examples.

    - For the letter writing, practice familiarizing yourself with the correct structure of how to write a letter. It is very important that you read the instructions and accomplish every item required. When writing a letter, depending on the situation, you can write it in an informal or formal way. But always remember to be polite in the words that you write.

    - For the editorial/essay writing, the questions would normally be generic. But knowledge of general information would be very helpful to you especially if you need to provide examples. The minimum number of words for this is 250 words. And that is a lot especially if you have difficulty expressing your ideas in writing. Another good tip is providing an opening statement (at least 1 paragraph) so that you don't go directly to answering the question. This gives good structure to your essay and buys you a lot of words off the minimum requirement.

    - Expand your vocabulary, but make sure to know when and how to use them. Just because two words are synonyms in the thesaurus, doesn't mean you can automatically use them in the same context.

    - Use conjuctions to string your ideas together.

    - Never go under the minimum required number of words. They will take points off that.

    4. Speaking

    - Relax and feel comfortable as if you are only speaking to a friend.

    - The questions they ask are very generic and simple. But that doesn't mean you can give the most simplistic answer. For example, when asked "Would you like to own a boat?", it would be easy for you to answer "Yes". But answering "yes" does not give them enough information about your speaking abilities. A good answer would be "Yes, I would like to own a boat if I have the means to purchase one."

    - If, by an unfortunate draw, you are given a topic you are not familiar with or are being asked a personal experience about a certain topic that you have no experience of at all, I would suggest to make something up as fast as you can. For example, if asked "Describe the best speech you have ever heard and how this has affected you", and you draw a blank in your head not having ever heard a useful and inspiring speech in your life, make something up like hearing a good speech your High School valedictorian had when he/she talked about the challenges you are about to face and how graduating high school is just the beginning. It may not be true, but the interviewer does not know that.

    - You don't have to talk fast. There are no minimum words. What is important is to construct your sentences properly and deliver them articulately.


    Good luck to all! :D

    ICT Business Analyst - 261111
    Visa Subclass 189

    24 June 2013 - Skills Assessment submitted to ACS
    15 Aug 2013 - IELTs General Speaking Test
    17 Aug 2013 - IELTs General Test (Listening, Reading, Writing)
    30 Aug 2013 - IELTs Results (L - 9.0, R - 8.0, W - 8.0, S - 8.0, Overall - 8.5)
    24 Sept 2013 - Favorable letter received from ACS (ICT Business Analyst)
    26 Sept 2013 - Submitted EOI (70 points)
    7 Oct 2013 - Received Invitation to Apply (Visa Subclass 189)
    11 Oct 2013 - Submitted Visa Application
    21 Oct 2013 - Medical Exam (I completed mine, partner had to wait for a few days to complete hers)
    - applied for NBI Clearance
    24 Oct 2013 - Primary Applicant (me) Medicals uploaded by NHSI.
    4 Nov 2013 - Partner completed Medical Exam
    5 Nov 2013 - Claim NBI Clearance
    - Secondary Applicant (partner) Medicals uploaded by NHSI.
    6 Nov 2013 - 20 Nov 2013 waiting for CO.
    21 Nov 2013 - CO Allocated
    26 Nov 2013 - Visa Grant (yehey!!)
    21 March 2014 - Flight to Sydney (Qantas 7PM HKT)
    6 May 2014 - Received 12 month contract from company (same company I worked for in Manila)
    12 May 2014 - Started work
    15 Dec 2014 - Hired permanently by current company (IT Service Manager).
    17 Apr 2018 - Applied for Citizenship (online)
    11 Mar 2019 - Citizenship Exam Schedule
    08 Oct 2019 - Australian Citizenship Ceremony

    ==Slowly, but surely..Things will fall into place..==

  • RepotSircRepotSirc Melbourne
    Posts: 102Member
    Joined: Feb 11, 2012

    What do you mean "Pretty Decent Scores"? Your scores are freaking AWESOME!!!! Congrats!!! :-D
    Un din nga sana sasabihin ko eh, kung decent lang ung sayo eh anu na lang itatawag mo sa score ko, haha.

    June 2012 - ACS - Network Administrator
    Nov 2012 - IELTS 7-7-7.5-7.5
    Feb 2013 - EOI - State Sponsorship SA
    July 2013 - Visa Application
    Aug 17 2013 - Wife IELTS 6-6-6-6
    Sep 03 2013 - CO Assigned
    Sep 09 2013 - Medical at Nationwide
    Sep 16 2013 - Received Referral Letter for CNCC
    Sep 17 2013 - Submitted CNCC
    Nov 02 2013 - Visa Grant Letter received
    Dec 14 2013 - Wife arrived in Adelaide
    Dec 20 2013 - Wife found work
    March 18 2014 - I arrived in Adelaide
    May 01 2014 - Found 4 months Contract - Network Engineer
    Oct 25 2014 - Found my permanent and full time job

  • mhejmhej Sydney
    Posts: 202Member
    Joined: May 29, 2013
    @RepotSirc - hehe. I didn't want to sound "mayabang" kasi by saying I got great scores. Also, I didn't expect to get a score like that. Sobrang sineryoso ko yung pagrereview na halos umiyak na ako when I get low scores sa mga practice exams. 8D

    ICT Business Analyst - 261111
    Visa Subclass 189

    24 June 2013 - Skills Assessment submitted to ACS
    15 Aug 2013 - IELTs General Speaking Test
    17 Aug 2013 - IELTs General Test (Listening, Reading, Writing)
    30 Aug 2013 - IELTs Results (L - 9.0, R - 8.0, W - 8.0, S - 8.0, Overall - 8.5)
    24 Sept 2013 - Favorable letter received from ACS (ICT Business Analyst)
    26 Sept 2013 - Submitted EOI (70 points)
    7 Oct 2013 - Received Invitation to Apply (Visa Subclass 189)
    11 Oct 2013 - Submitted Visa Application
    21 Oct 2013 - Medical Exam (I completed mine, partner had to wait for a few days to complete hers)
    - applied for NBI Clearance
    24 Oct 2013 - Primary Applicant (me) Medicals uploaded by NHSI.
    4 Nov 2013 - Partner completed Medical Exam
    5 Nov 2013 - Claim NBI Clearance
    - Secondary Applicant (partner) Medicals uploaded by NHSI.
    6 Nov 2013 - 20 Nov 2013 waiting for CO.
    21 Nov 2013 - CO Allocated
    26 Nov 2013 - Visa Grant (yehey!!)
    21 March 2014 - Flight to Sydney (Qantas 7PM HKT)
    6 May 2014 - Received 12 month contract from company (same company I worked for in Manila)
    12 May 2014 - Started work
    15 Dec 2014 - Hired permanently by current company (IT Service Manager).
    17 Apr 2018 - Applied for Citizenship (online)
    11 Mar 2019 - Citizenship Exam Schedule
    08 Oct 2019 - Australian Citizenship Ceremony

    ==Slowly, but surely..Things will fall into place..==

  • wizzwizz Melbourne
    Posts: 698Member
    Joined: Apr 17, 2013
    @mhej ang galing! congrats sa tumataginting na IELTS 20pts!!! pero totoo yan pag talaga focus at seryoso ka makukuha mo talaga eh. :)

    ANZSCO 149311

    31 May 13 - Vetassess Requirements Acknowledge
    22 June 13 - IELTS Exam at IDP Singapore
    5 July 13 - IELTS Passed
    30 Aug 13 - Vetassess Results - Positive + EOI Submitted
    4 Sept 13 - Initial Contact WA SS
    5 Sept 13 - Invited to apply for WA SS
    9 Sept 13 - WA SS approved!
    12 Sept 13 - Lodged Visa 190
    23 Sept 13 - Medical Examination - SATA Bedok SG
    27 Sept 13 - Medicals Uploaded
    21 Oct 13 - CO allocated (Adelaide GSM Team 6, MN)
    1 Nov 13 - SG PCC submitted
    5 Dec 13 - Visa Granted! To God be the Glory!
    IED: 26 Sep 14

    1 May 14 - Touchdown Perth! :D
    12 June 14 - First day of work. God will always provide. :)

    Psalm 37:4 Delight yourself in the Lord;
    And He will give you the desires of your heart.

  • filipinacpafilipinacpa Perth
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    @mhej congrats sayo! Dream score ko yan :)

    2013-Jan : Decided to pursue my OZ dream
    2013-Nov : 1st Ielts-GT @ BC Manila: L-8;R-6.5;W-7.5;S-7.5
    2014-Mar : 2nd Ielts-GT @ BC Manila: L-8;R-8.5;W-6.5;S-7.5
    Pahinga muna. Sakit sa puso at bulsa!
    2015-May : 1st PTE-A @ Bright Center: L-85;R-70;S-45;W-90
    2015-May : 2nd PTE-A @Bright Center; L-90;R-70;S-47; W-90
    2015-July : 3rd PTE-A @Pearson: L-90;R-77;S-83; W-90
    2015-July 20 - Lodged docs to Vetassess
    2015-Oct 1: VET Positive outcome
    2015-Oct 1: Submitted EOI 190 visa to NSW (55+5)
    2015-Oct 4: Submitted EOI 190 visa to QLD (55+5)
    2015-Oct 5: QLD responded, rejected 190 due to change in occupation list but offered ITA for 489 visa instead
    2015-Nov 2: DIBP points adjusted to 60+5 (due to additional 1 year working experience)
    2015-Nov 26: ITA for SS NSW
    2015-Nov 28: Submitted SS application
    2015-Dec 17: SS Approved + Received 190 ITA
    2015-Dec 23: Lodged 190
    2016-Jan 5: Medical @ Nationwide (Php5,600 na ang fee!!)
    2016-Jan 8: Medical Clearance Provided - no action required (Thank you Lord!)
    2016-Jan 18: Applied for Driving SP and Direct Visa Grant!!! (Thank You Lord!)
    2016-Jan 26: PDOS @ CFO Manila + Enrolled at A1 Driving

    2016-Mar 14: BIG MOVE!:)

    PRAY HARD, WORK HARDER! :)

    Compilation of tips/resources/stories for PTE Academic Preparation: pteacademicreview.wordpress.com
    Template or "cheat sheet" as called by many: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B1OZBrQj0i5LWU1EYVZTaDF4VzA/view?usp=sharing
    sana po makatulong.. God bless!

  • reneerenee Toronto
    Posts: 63Member
    Joined: Aug 24, 2013
    Pwede po pa advice sa academic writing, dito po ako nabitin for 6.5, need ko po band 7. First time ko pa lang mag take at self study lang po, although sa writing nga ako nahihirapan magpractice,,, I appreciate your tips and secrets to share,, thanks!

    17-08-2013 IELTS Acad Take 1 @ BC Dubai L-7.5 R-7 W-6.5 S-7
    14-09-2013 Applied for writing remark
    26-10-2013 ELTS Acad Take 2 @ BC Dubai L-6.0 R-6.0 W-7 S-6.5
    09-11-2013 Received writing remark but score unchanged
    14-12-2013 IELTS Acad Take 3 @ UOWD Dubai - L-7 R-7 W-6.5 S-6.5
    20-01-2014 Preparing again for Take 4...Lord bless our struggle to achieve our target band score...

  • yhanie_17yhanie_17 Mandaluyong
    Posts: 193Member
    Joined: Nov 27, 2011
    I have finished my exam last 29 August pero I know na mababa score ko especially sa writing... Take 2 ako for sure but of course hoping na sumabit kahit 7 man lang.

    ======================================
    Occupation: Computer and Systems Engineer (ANZSCO 263111)
    Main Applicant: Wife
    29 April 2013 - ACS Skills Assessment
    27 July 2013 - Suitablle, AQF Bachelor Degree, 8 yrs experience counted
    29 August 2013 - IELTS Exam Date, IDP Singapore

  • quellyquelly Davao City
    Posts: 53Member
    Joined: Nov 11, 2012
    Congrats to those who got great scores! >:D< for some reason the pressure is getting into my nerves since my occupation is now available in only two states...waaah!

    OCCUPATION: Training and Development Professional (223311)

    Nov 2012 - prepared documents for VETASSESS
    December 2012 - submitted documents for VETASSESS
    March 8, 2013 - IELTS Speaking Test
    March 9, 2013 - IELTS L-R-W
    March 20, 2013 - IELTS Results L-7.0, R-6.5, W-7.5, S-7.0 ;((
    March 21, 2013 - VETASSESS and Points Test Advice Results - POSITIVE
    Nov. 20, 2013 - IELTS Speaking Exam (2nd take)
    Nov. 21, 2013 - IELTS LRW Exam (2nd take)
    Dec. 4, 2013 - IELTS Result POSITIVE!!! (L-8.5, R-7, W-7.5, S-7.5)
    Dec. 5, 2013 - Submitted EOI for Subclass 190
    Feb. 22, 2014 - Submitted ACT Nomination Application

    ~I believe that things happen for a reason and I have faith that God will make things possible at the right time.~

    Claim it. Believe it. Achieve it.

  • reneerenee Toronto
    Posts: 63Member
    Joined: Aug 24, 2013
    San po maganda magreview ng IELTS sa pinas? Meron po ba sa british council? Mahal kc dito sa abroad prep course nila, hehe

    17-08-2013 IELTS Acad Take 1 @ BC Dubai L-7.5 R-7 W-6.5 S-7
    14-09-2013 Applied for writing remark
    26-10-2013 ELTS Acad Take 2 @ BC Dubai L-6.0 R-6.0 W-7 S-6.5
    09-11-2013 Received writing remark but score unchanged
    14-12-2013 IELTS Acad Take 3 @ UOWD Dubai - L-7 R-7 W-6.5 S-6.5
    20-01-2014 Preparing again for Take 4...Lord bless our struggle to achieve our target band score...

  • gmad06gmad06 Melbourne
    Posts: 490Member
    Joined: Aug 21, 2012
    hi @yhanie_17 would you mind sharing your essay task2 prompt? thank u

    Nominated Skill 263111 Computer Network and Systems
    Engineer
    1-26-2013 Submitted ACS Assesment
    4-2-2013 ACS assesment received suitable/Bachelor's Degree
    9-7-2013 IELTS 2nd retake w/EOR ( L-8.5,R-9,W-7,S-7) thank u Lord
    11-4-2013 got invite for 189VISA..
    11-11-2013 lodged visa application
    11-21-2013 medicals uploaded, no further exams required
    11-28-2013 CO allocated, Team 6 Adelaide
    12-18-2013 Completed all documents required
    12-19-2013 Visa Grant; IED Nov.18,2014 God Loves Us!!
    07-27-2014 Arrived Melbourne
    09-11-2014 Received job offer
    09-29-2014 First day at work
    11-15-2014 Bought our first car

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  • jcruzjcruz Mandaluyong
    Posts: 8Member
    Joined: Dec 14, 2012
    @renee hello renee. I'm currently enrolled sa JRooz Review Center. So far so good. Magaling yung mga IELTS instructors at d ka talga pababayaan. What I also like about this review center is that they have flexible sched - good for me because I'm currently working.

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    • Bill Cosby
  • bachuchaybachuchay Bacchus Marsh
    Posts: 324Member
    Joined: Jun 20, 2012
    @jcruz

    How much po s jrooz?

    Nominated Occupation- Electronic Engineering Technician (TRA312412)

    April 1, 2012- Submitted TRA Skills Assessment Requirements
    April 5, 2012- TRA Acknowledgment
    May 26, 2012- TRA Skills Assessment "POSITIVE"
    June 7, 2013- IELTS @ BC L-6.5/ R-8/ W-6 / S-6
    August 17, 2013- IELTS @IDP L-7,/R/W-6 S-6.5
    July 30, 2014- Applied SA SS/ EOI 60pts
    September 1, 2014- SA SS Apprroved
    September 2, 2014- Lodged Visa 190/ Upload Requirements
    October 30, 2014 - Visa Grant

  • jcruzjcruz Mandaluyong
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    @bachuchay depends on the program po. You can visit their website nalang at http://www.jroozreview.com/ielts-review-center. You can ask if meron cla promo para mas makaless po kayo. Good luck po.

    In order to succeed, your desire for success should be greater than your fear of failure.

    • Bill Cosby
  • alchemicusalchemicus Doha
    Posts: 64Member
    Joined: Jun 10, 2012
    ...some additional tips from the IDP :) :

    How to prepare for your IELTS test:
    http://www.ieltsessentials.com/prepare/how_to_prepare.aspx

    http://www.ucb.com.au/listen_online | http://acctv.com.au/watch.php
    December 2013
    – I praise and thank You my Lord God and my Creator!!!!! You alone deserve all the glory!!!!!
    – visa grant!!! (after about 3 weeks, after uploading all required documents (after about 5 weeks of waiting since CO allocation))
    November 2013
    – Form 80, Form 1221, résumé, and third PCC uploaded; copies of payslips and skills assessment results reuploaded—e-mail sent to CO as well (My Father, thank You for allowing me to pass through this stage!)
    October 2013
    – CO allocated (GSM Adelaide – Team 06); additional documents requested by CO
    – health exams done ("No health examinations are required...") — Thank You once again!
    September 2013
    – lodged visa application—Lord, thank You for allowing me to pass through this stage!
    – positive response from WA; negative from VIC
    – applied for VIC state nomination; invited to apply for QLD and WA state nominations too—eventually declined QLD invitation after much thought, careful consideration, and prayers
    – obtained positive VETASSESS skills assessment and subsequently submitted EOI
    July 2013 – IELTS at the British Council; first take — thank You!
    May 2013 – applied for VETASSESS skills assessment


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  • filipinacpafilipinacpa Perth
    Posts: 1,085Member, De-activated
    Joined: Jan 24, 2013
    Hi all, how long did you prepare for your IELTS exam?

    2013-Jan : Decided to pursue my OZ dream
    2013-Nov : 1st Ielts-GT @ BC Manila: L-8;R-6.5;W-7.5;S-7.5
    2014-Mar : 2nd Ielts-GT @ BC Manila: L-8;R-8.5;W-6.5;S-7.5
    Pahinga muna. Sakit sa puso at bulsa!
    2015-May : 1st PTE-A @ Bright Center: L-85;R-70;S-45;W-90
    2015-May : 2nd PTE-A @Bright Center; L-90;R-70;S-47; W-90
    2015-July : 3rd PTE-A @Pearson: L-90;R-77;S-83; W-90
    2015-July 20 - Lodged docs to Vetassess
    2015-Oct 1: VET Positive outcome
    2015-Oct 1: Submitted EOI 190 visa to NSW (55+5)
    2015-Oct 4: Submitted EOI 190 visa to QLD (55+5)
    2015-Oct 5: QLD responded, rejected 190 due to change in occupation list but offered ITA for 489 visa instead
    2015-Nov 2: DIBP points adjusted to 60+5 (due to additional 1 year working experience)
    2015-Nov 26: ITA for SS NSW
    2015-Nov 28: Submitted SS application
    2015-Dec 17: SS Approved + Received 190 ITA
    2015-Dec 23: Lodged 190
    2016-Jan 5: Medical @ Nationwide (Php5,600 na ang fee!!)
    2016-Jan 8: Medical Clearance Provided - no action required (Thank you Lord!)
    2016-Jan 18: Applied for Driving SP and Direct Visa Grant!!! (Thank You Lord!)
    2016-Jan 26: PDOS @ CFO Manila + Enrolled at A1 Driving

    2016-Mar 14: BIG MOVE!:)

    PRAY HARD, WORK HARDER! :)

    Compilation of tips/resources/stories for PTE Academic Preparation: pteacademicreview.wordpress.com
    Template or "cheat sheet" as called by many: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B1OZBrQj0i5LWU1EYVZTaDF4VzA/view?usp=sharing
    sana po makatulong.. God bless!

  • wizzwizz Melbourne
    Posts: 698Member
    Joined: Apr 17, 2013
    @filipinacpa saktong 1 month lang dahil nalaman ko na mbbusy ako ng sobra sa work sa month na plinano ko sana mag exam. pero nagdedicate ako ng at least 1hr every day pag-uwi fr work para mag-aral. yun ung ginawa ko.

    ANZSCO 149311

    31 May 13 - Vetassess Requirements Acknowledge
    22 June 13 - IELTS Exam at IDP Singapore
    5 July 13 - IELTS Passed
    30 Aug 13 - Vetassess Results - Positive + EOI Submitted
    4 Sept 13 - Initial Contact WA SS
    5 Sept 13 - Invited to apply for WA SS
    9 Sept 13 - WA SS approved!
    12 Sept 13 - Lodged Visa 190
    23 Sept 13 - Medical Examination - SATA Bedok SG
    27 Sept 13 - Medicals Uploaded
    21 Oct 13 - CO allocated (Adelaide GSM Team 6, MN)
    1 Nov 13 - SG PCC submitted
    5 Dec 13 - Visa Granted! To God be the Glory!
    IED: 26 Sep 14

    1 May 14 - Touchdown Perth! :D
    12 June 14 - First day of work. God will always provide. :)

    Psalm 37:4 Delight yourself in the Lord;
    And He will give you the desires of your heart.

  • katiequintoskatiequintos Kuala Lumpur
    Posts: 29Member
    Joined: Jul 11, 2013
    Hands down to @mhej and to all those who passed IELTS.
    I know the pros are here. =)
    And I'm writing to seek help from you guys to please have a look on the sample writing I did yesterday. I am working here in Malaysia and didn't have a chance to enroll at Niners for review. I paid for a writing review though, but the former examiner hasn't gotten back to me yet. So it would be great if i can get inputs from you guys.

    I need your honest feedback. Please help me improve my writing. My exam will be on Saturday (September 7), so if you could please please comment on what I did, I would appreciate it very much.

    Thanks guys!

    Cheers,
    Katie




    WRITING TASK 2


    You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

    Write about the following topic:

    Clothes are a necessary part of people’s lives.

    What do you think clothes communicate about an individual?

    Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

    Write at least 250 words.



    Clothing is a basic human need. For most people, clothing gives us protection from the weather. It gives the feeling of warmth and brings comfort to the body. While for me, clothing defines my fashion sense and creativity.

    I know people who are really not particular to the clothes they wear. Most of them don’t even care about the color or if it is in style. What is important to them is something that could make them feel comfortable. For example it is winter, they will wear anything that could protect them from the cold. It doesn't matter if they will look good in it, or if they will look skinnier in it, but as long as it gives them warmth, that's what matters!

    From my point of view, clothing is a very important aspect of my life as I use it as a way to express my personality. It is something I give a thought to weekly. Since my college days, I plan out the clothes I will wear every week. I never repeat my outfit for a month. It is a mortal sin for me to go outside with my shoes not complementing my dress. I'd rather not go and meet my friends if I’m not happy with what I wear. I make sure that the color of my dress, ensembles, nail polish, and hair go all together. It doesn't mean I have to spend a lot to buy new clothes every time, just to come up with my outfit for the day. Being creative; mixing and matching what I already have; and being able to come up with a new look after that is a big satisfaction for me.

    Clothing might just be a necessity for some, however, in my opinion; it is a way to express one's creativity and fashion sense.


    Subclass 190
    ANZCODE 312411 Electronic Engineering Draftsperson
    September 7, 2013: IELTS L:7 R:6.5 W:7 S:6.5

  • SungsungSungsung North Ryde
    Posts: 91Member
    Joined: Jul 10, 2012
    @katiequintos, think of some words that you can substitute to the words clothing and clothes like dress, garment, gear, attire, apparel.

    Use the third person when writing as it will give you a higher band score.

    I will try to look for a sample essay regarding clothing.

    My Timeline
    June 30, 2012- Took IDP IELTS Exam in Clark, Pampanga
    July 12, 2012- IELTS Results (L-9, R-7, W-8.5, S-7.5, OB:8.0)
    August 16, 2012- Submitted document for Engineers Australia Skills Assessment (Telecommunications Engineer)
    Dec. 18, 2012- Officially received positive assessment result from EA. Work experience count was wrong, made an appeal to EA.
    Jan. 4, 2013- Submitted EOI
    Jan. 7, 2013- received invitation to apply for Subclass 189 Skilled Migrant Permanent Visa
    Feb 21, 2013- Received correct Assessment Outcome from EA
    March 1, 2013- Received confirmation from DIAC re Visa Application
    April 8, 2013- CO Allocated (Team 6- Adelaide)
    April 12, 2013- Medical Exam
    April 28, 2013- Submitted NBI Clearance
    June 27, 2013- Submitted Saudi PCC
    July 2, 2013- VISA GRANTED!

  • SungsungSungsung North Ryde
    Posts: 91Member
    Joined: Jul 10, 2012
    You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

    Write about the following topic:

    In many countries, schoolchildren are required to wear school uniforms.

    Do you think this should this be enforced in all schools?

    Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

    Write at least 250 words.

    In many countries, pupils are required to wear uniforms when attending school, and this is something that should be enforced for the following reasons.

    Primarily, students, especially those in their teenagers years, are under pressure both academically and socially; insisting on a standardised uniform within the school alleviates some of this as it means that the student does not have to worry about whether their peers think that they are dressed well or in the latest fashions. This has the added advantage for those from lower income families who may simply not be able to afford the clothes worn by those from more affluent families.

    Not only does it remove the social pressure, but wearing a school uniform also has a psychological advantage, as the student is dressed in the mode of attire used for study. Much like wearing a suit and tie may signal going to work for many people, wearing a school uniform prepares the child for the day of learning.

    However, this perhaps works best for younger students. By age 16 or 17, it may be appropriate for the student to wear more casual clothing when they reach their later teens, as the idea of 'conforming' by wearing a uniform could discourage the student from pursuing further education and this is often the time in which young adults are looking to establish their own clear identity. It is at this point that it may be more productive to allow more relaxed clothing such as jeans.

    In conclusion, although a school uniform does have advantages at certain stages of a student's academic career, there is also a time when the enforcement of a standardised set of clothing may be counterproductive.

    (282 words)

    My Timeline
    June 30, 2012- Took IDP IELTS Exam in Clark, Pampanga
    July 12, 2012- IELTS Results (L-9, R-7, W-8.5, S-7.5, OB:8.0)
    August 16, 2012- Submitted document for Engineers Australia Skills Assessment (Telecommunications Engineer)
    Dec. 18, 2012- Officially received positive assessment result from EA. Work experience count was wrong, made an appeal to EA.
    Jan. 4, 2013- Submitted EOI
    Jan. 7, 2013- received invitation to apply for Subclass 189 Skilled Migrant Permanent Visa
    Feb 21, 2013- Received correct Assessment Outcome from EA
    March 1, 2013- Received confirmation from DIAC re Visa Application
    April 8, 2013- CO Allocated (Team 6- Adelaide)
    April 12, 2013- Medical Exam
    April 28, 2013- Submitted NBI Clearance
    June 27, 2013- Submitted Saudi PCC
    July 2, 2013- VISA GRANTED!

  • habibihabibi Mandaluyong
    Posts: 87Member
    Joined: Aug 16, 2013
    @mhej Ano SOL mo? Parang ang tagal ng assessment sa yo.
  • katiequintoskatiequintos Kuala Lumpur
    Posts: 29Member
    Joined: Jul 11, 2013
    @sungsung : Thank you! I sent it out to my friends too. Most of them told me the same thing. I sounded like a blogger, not formal writing at all. Question, are you guys satisfied of how I answered the task?

    Cheers,
    Katie

    Subclass 190
    ANZCODE 312411 Electronic Engineering Draftsperson
    September 7, 2013: IELTS L:7 R:6.5 W:7 S:6.5

  • SungsungSungsung North Ryde
    Posts: 91Member
    Joined: Jul 10, 2012
    @katiequintos, ok naman yung writing mo. magaling ka ng mag -English kelangan langng polishing at i-organize mabiti ang yong mga ideas. At saka improve pa ng konti ang vocabulary. At iwasan ang "!" kasi formal writing tayo. Eto may tips ako sa yo. I'm not a writer but I got an 8.5 in IELTS writing exam. Technique lang at bilis magisip ang kelangan:

    WRITING TIPS- gaya nga ng sabi nung isang kasama natin dito, gumawa na kayo ng pattern para sa Introduction, Body, at Conclusion. for example, sa INTRODUCTION, puede niyong simulan ng "In a contemporary society....", "In the advent of globalisation....", "It is not uncommon nowadays to..." Para naman sa BODY, puedeng "Perhaps the most persuasive argument that supports the idea of..." para sa argument at kung counter-argument naman, puedeng "Granted, there are also some strong points that contradicts..." sa Conclusion yung usual na "In Summary", "Therefore", etc. pinakaimportante dito ay yung outlining at yung sentence construction, guwag kalimutan ang mga connectors tulad ng "In addition", "Moreover", etc.

    My Timeline
    June 30, 2012- Took IDP IELTS Exam in Clark, Pampanga
    July 12, 2012- IELTS Results (L-9, R-7, W-8.5, S-7.5, OB:8.0)
    August 16, 2012- Submitted document for Engineers Australia Skills Assessment (Telecommunications Engineer)
    Dec. 18, 2012- Officially received positive assessment result from EA. Work experience count was wrong, made an appeal to EA.
    Jan. 4, 2013- Submitted EOI
    Jan. 7, 2013- received invitation to apply for Subclass 189 Skilled Migrant Permanent Visa
    Feb 21, 2013- Received correct Assessment Outcome from EA
    March 1, 2013- Received confirmation from DIAC re Visa Application
    April 8, 2013- CO Allocated (Team 6- Adelaide)
    April 12, 2013- Medical Exam
    April 28, 2013- Submitted NBI Clearance
    June 27, 2013- Submitted Saudi PCC
    July 2, 2013- VISA GRANTED!

  • katiequintoskatiequintos Kuala Lumpur
    Posts: 29Member
    Joined: Jul 11, 2013
    Wow! 8.5 ang galing!!! Thank you so much for the tips...I need to find time for this. Gawin ko tonight. Thank you ulit ng marami!

    Subclass 190
    ANZCODE 312411 Electronic Engineering Draftsperson
    September 7, 2013: IELTS L:7 R:6.5 W:7 S:6.5

  • ynnozkiynnozki Melby
    Posts: 292Member
    Joined: Apr 12, 2013
    @katiequintos good idea yung nasimulan mo, para sa writing I think marami dito ang handang magCritique ng mga essay like @sungsung napakalaking tulong po nyan...

    papacritique din ako pag full blast na ulet ako magreview for retake..3rd take na kung sakali

    312511 Mechanical Engineering Draftsperson

    05/06/13--ielts exam BC (LRWS=6.5)
    06/20/13--submitted documents to TRA, 07/31/13--TRA Result Unsuccesful
    07/27/13-- me and wife ielts exam IDP (still zero points)
    08/23/13--submitted new TRA docs, 10/10/13--result succesful
    10/26/13-3rd take ielts BC (LRS=7, W6.5)
    11/10/13-EOI submitted, SA SS application submitted--deffered
    10/06/15-CDR result succesful
    12/08/15- PTE result L76/R79/S86/W74
    01/29/16- Victoria SS --denied
    08/08/16- submitted new Victoria SS application
    09/23/16- ITA received
    10/31/16- lodge Visa 190
    12/02/16- DG baby...thank you Lord..long journey reached the visa finish line

  • reneerenee Toronto
    Posts: 63Member
    Joined: Aug 24, 2013
    hello po! pwede po mag ask anong magandang website to subscribe for online academic ielts tutor who can check writing, thanks for the suggestions

    17-08-2013 IELTS Acad Take 1 @ BC Dubai L-7.5 R-7 W-6.5 S-7
    14-09-2013 Applied for writing remark
    26-10-2013 ELTS Acad Take 2 @ BC Dubai L-6.0 R-6.0 W-7 S-6.5
    09-11-2013 Received writing remark but score unchanged
    14-12-2013 IELTS Acad Take 3 @ UOWD Dubai - L-7 R-7 W-6.5 S-6.5
    20-01-2014 Preparing again for Take 4...Lord bless our struggle to achieve our target band score...

  • marc_chronomarc_chrono Brisbane
    Posts: 75Member
    Joined: Aug 27, 2013
    Hi Guys,

    Ask lang po kung ano usually ang topic na lumalabas sa writing task 1 & task 2? Need lang some ideas. Thanks! :)

    "The heart of man plans his way, but the Lord establishes his steps." - Proverbs 16:9

  • michel_75michel_75 Bulacan
    Posts: 409Member
    Joined: Oct 03, 2012
    @marc_chrono anong module kukunin mo po?
  • chiko_auchiko_au Singapore
    Posts: 49Member
    Joined: May 24, 2013
    edited September 2013
    @chiko_au, post mo naman dito Sir kung nabago ba ang W/S mo na 6.5. Meron din kasi akong ganyang score kaso nanghinayang akong magpa remark at nung nakapag decide ako na itry, too late na dahil lagpas na ng 6weeks. :(
    Hi @cylin, you requested that I post the result of my re-mark. I am delighted to inform you that my scores in both W and S are successfully bumped up :) Writing (from 6.5 to 7.0) and Speaking (6.5 to 8.0). Examiners are human and may not have assessed a candidate accurately. Requesting for a re-mark (or EOR) does work wonders in some cases when a more senior examiner reviews your materials. Kailangan mo lang talagang paniwalaan ang sarili mo, ang proseso at maghintay ng matagal (mga 10 weeks inabot for me bago ko na natanggap updated TRF), but it's all worth it. The cost of re-mark will be refunded kapag positibo ang resulta. Sobrang saya ko sa naging outcome :) I'm posting this narin para in a way makatulong sa iba na tulad kong nag-aalinlangan din noon. Not many people kasi in this forum explored this option at nahirapan din akong mag-decide dati dahil kaunti lang success cases na nakikita ko.

    I would like to take this opportunity narin to thank the contributors ng thread na ito. Each one na nagbahagi ng kanilang mga opinyon. Marami akong natutunan sa mga topics na dini-discuss at reviewers na inyo pong binabahagi. Lahat po dito nagtutulungan. I wish success sa mga magte-take ng IELTS in the coming weeks!


    Nominated Occupation: 261311 (Analyst Programmer)-
    May 16, 2013: ACS Skills Assessment Submitted
    Jun 08, 2013: IELTS @ BC SG - L/R: 7.5, W/S: 6.5 [ :( ]
    Jun 28, 2013: IELTS EOR - Applied Re-marking for W/S
    Aug 12, 2013: ACS Result - Suitable, AQF Bachelor + 8 yrs exp [ :) ]
    Sep 02, 2013: IELTS EOR - Success: L/R: 7.5, W: 7.0, S: 8.0 [ :) ]
    Sep 12, 2013: EOI Submitted for Visa 189 (65 points)
    Oct 07, 2013: Invited for Visa 189 [ :D ]
    Oct 30, 2013: Lodged Visa 189
    Nov 20, 2013: CO Allocated - GSM Brisbane Team 33 [ :) ]
    Nov 29, 2013: SG COC Applied
    Dec 16, 2013: Took Medical Exam
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    Lord, maraming salamat po sa pagpapala =)

  • filipinacpafilipinacpa Perth
    Posts: 1,085Member, De-activated
    Joined: Jan 24, 2013
    @chiko_au congratulations po!! Tuloy tuloy na yan. :)

    2013-Jan : Decided to pursue my OZ dream
    2013-Nov : 1st Ielts-GT @ BC Manila: L-8;R-6.5;W-7.5;S-7.5
    2014-Mar : 2nd Ielts-GT @ BC Manila: L-8;R-8.5;W-6.5;S-7.5
    Pahinga muna. Sakit sa puso at bulsa!
    2015-May : 1st PTE-A @ Bright Center: L-85;R-70;S-45;W-90
    2015-May : 2nd PTE-A @Bright Center; L-90;R-70;S-47; W-90
    2015-July : 3rd PTE-A @Pearson: L-90;R-77;S-83; W-90
    2015-July 20 - Lodged docs to Vetassess
    2015-Oct 1: VET Positive outcome
    2015-Oct 1: Submitted EOI 190 visa to NSW (55+5)
    2015-Oct 4: Submitted EOI 190 visa to QLD (55+5)
    2015-Oct 5: QLD responded, rejected 190 due to change in occupation list but offered ITA for 489 visa instead
    2015-Nov 2: DIBP points adjusted to 60+5 (due to additional 1 year working experience)
    2015-Nov 26: ITA for SS NSW
    2015-Nov 28: Submitted SS application
    2015-Dec 17: SS Approved + Received 190 ITA
    2015-Dec 23: Lodged 190
    2016-Jan 5: Medical @ Nationwide (Php5,600 na ang fee!!)
    2016-Jan 8: Medical Clearance Provided - no action required (Thank you Lord!)
    2016-Jan 18: Applied for Driving SP and Direct Visa Grant!!! (Thank You Lord!)
    2016-Jan 26: PDOS @ CFO Manila + Enrolled at A1 Driving

    2016-Mar 14: BIG MOVE!:)

    PRAY HARD, WORK HARDER! :)

    Compilation of tips/resources/stories for PTE Academic Preparation: pteacademicreview.wordpress.com
    Template or "cheat sheet" as called by many: https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B1OZBrQj0i5LWU1EYVZTaDF4VzA/view?usp=sharing
    sana po makatulong.. God bless!

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